[Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Agenda and documents for WG call on Tuesday 22 September

[Mary Wong]

Hello again everyone,

Attached is a document from Sub Team 4 that shows most of the general
comments it has reviewed, its categorizations of these into one or more of
seven possible categories, and other notes from the Sub Team. As you¹ll
recall, Sub Team 4 was tasked to review those public comments that were
placed by staff into Part 4 of the WG¹s Public Comment Review Tool, as being
comments that, while substantive, were not formulated to specifically answer
or address a particular WG recommendation (those that were having already
been placed into either Parts 1, 2 or 3 of the WG¹s Public Comment Review
Tool or referred to one of the other three Sub Teams).

For completeness of record, please note that the comments that were reviewed
and reflected in this document do not specifically include the statements
sent in through Respect Our Privacy, the petition from Save Domain Privacy,
or the additional 500+ pages of comments made by signatories of the Save
Domain Privacy petition. These have either been referred to (and reviewed
by) Sub Teams 2 or 3 (as applicable), or generally summarized them into a
set of categories for Sub Teams 2, 3 and 4 in mid-August (as noted in
Section II of Part 4 of the WG¹s Public Comment Review Tool).

Thanks and cheers
Mary

Mary Wong
Senior Policy Director
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
Telephone: +1 603 574 4889
Email: mary.wong at icann.org


From:  Mary Wong <mary.wong at icann.org>
Date:  Tuesday, September 22, 2015 at 02:59
To:  "gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg at icann.org" <gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg at icann.org>
Subject:  Agenda and documents for WG call on Tuesday 22 September

> Dear WG members,
> 
> The proposed agenda for the next WG call, scheduled for Tuesday 22 September
> at 1400 UTC, is as follows:
> 1. Roll call/updates to SOI
> 2. Discuss proposed updated text for Section 1.3.2 of WG report based on WG
> discussions of Sub Team 1¹s recommendations (see attached document and note
> below)
> 3. Discuss proposed updated text for Section 1.3.3 of WG report based on WG
> co-chairs¹ suggested text (see attached document ­ as circulated to the WG on
> 18 September)
> 4. Status update/report from Sub Team 4 (co-conveners: Kathy Kleiman & Paul
> McGrady; document forthcoming)
> 5. [if time permits] Review list of issues spotted from Parts 1-3 of the WG
> Public Comment Review Tool (see attached document)
> 6. Next steps
> Important note on Agenda Item #2: The attached text has not yet been fully
> reviewed by Sub Team 1. It was prepared by staff based on the recommendations
> and reports from Sub Team 1 and the consequent WG discussions and conclusions.
> 
> Thanks and cheers
> Mary
> 
> Mary Wong
> Senior Policy Director
> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889
> Email: mary.wong at icann.org
> 
> 


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