[Gnso-sc-budget] [v.0.9.2] Please review urgently - draft Council comment on the Budget

[Jimson Olufuye]

Hi Ayden et al,
 
Something is missing in this sentence after "...next two...":
 
 
+ The GNSO Council understands that Reserve Fund replenishment is a current area of focus for the ICANN organization. We would like to see a plan developed over the course of the next two  (months or ???) which reviews all options for replenishing the fund in a sustainable way. 

 
Could it be "next two months" that is anticipated or what?
 
Cheers,
 
JO
--------- Original Message --------- Subject: [Gnso-sc-budget] [v.0.9.2] Please review urgently - draft Council comment on the Budget
From: "Ayden Férdeline" <icann at ferdeline.com>
Date: 3/6/18 5:47 pm
To: "gnso-sc-budget at icann.org" <gnso-sc-budget at icann.org>

 Dear all,
 
Just a friendly reminder that we need to send our comment on the FY19 Budget through to the Council mailing list today for evaluation and review. 
 
Unless I hear any objections, I plan to send through the attached file (with track changes marked to 'accepted') in 3 hours time at 17:30 UTC. 
 
I did a quick fact check and couldn't find where the $8.1 million figure originated from re: increase in personnel costs. Document #2, page 9 says $7.3 million, so I've adjusted this now - but I would appreciate it if someone could please double check this. 
 
The other changes I made were largely grammatical, replacing "implantation" on page 3 with "implementation", and reverting one sentence regarding GSE to a previous draft of our comment (please see my email here). 
 
I have also flagged one edit on page 2, second bullet point of our specific comments. "SAs/Cs" was changed to "SGs/Cs". However "SGs/Cs" was the original language, and I believe the change to "SOs/Cs" originated from Marilyn. Marilyn could you please review this and kindly advise if this change to "SOs/Cs" was intentional? Thank you.
 
All - as a matter of priority could you please review the attached comment one last time and indicate if you have any concerns? Thank you very much. 
 
Best wishes,
 
Ayden Férdeline
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