[GNSO-TPR] Input Due 16 January: Draft Revisions to Recommendations 10-22

[Emily Barabas]

Dear working group members,



As discussed on yesterday’s call, staff had an action item to provide an updated redline revision of the Initial Report reflecting agreed updates to Recommendations 10-22 (see pages 26-39), as well as revisions resulting from the last round of input on the previous redline and strawman (see highlighted text on pages 17-19, 21, and 24). The document is attached.



Please carefully review this document in coordination with the groups you represent. If you feel that there are items that need to be revised, please enter them here<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Zoh8D2GuulpIDbyqwYsfRCSJkiGpa19k02eiEE-tWnE/edit?usp=sharing>. For each item, please include:



  *   Report version (the date listed in the header of the document) and applicable line numbers ( these are listed along the left margin of the document).
  *   Name and group you represent: If multiple WG members represent a group, input should be in coordination with these other members.
  *   Rationale: please provide a clear explanation for why you are proposing the revision.
  *   Specific proposed revision: Provide the language you would like to see added/removed/edited.



The deadline for submitting input is 16 January 2023. After the deadline, the working group will discuss the items submitted in the input document. Following review of those items, the text will be considered stable.



Please do not hesitate to reach out with any questions about the review process.



Kind regards,



 Caitlin, Julie, Berry, and Emily


Emily Barabas
Policy Development Support Senior Manager
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
Phone: +31 (0)6 84507976
www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org/>


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