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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Today, Wednesday 30 November, is the deadline for input on the following:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<ul style="margin-top:0cm" type="disc">
<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">redline revision of the Initial Report reflecting agreed updates to Recommendations 3-9.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">strawman draft of the new Recommendation 2 and response to Charter Question A7.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Please see details below.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="xmsonormal" style="margin:0cm"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Caitlin, Julie, Berry, and Emily</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">From:
</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Emily Barabas <emily.barabas@icann.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, 16 November 2022 at 18:18<br>
<b>To: </b>"gnso-tpr@icann.org" <gnso-tpr@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Input Due 30 November: Draft Revisions to Recommendations 2-9<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="xmsonormal" style="margin:0cm"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Dear working group members,</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="xmsonormal" style="margin:0cm;caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-variant-caps: normal;orphans: auto;text-align:start;widows: auto;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;word-spacing:0px">
<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="xmsonormal" style="margin:0cm;caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-variant-caps: normal;orphans: auto;text-align:start;widows: auto;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;word-spacing:0px">
<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">As discussed on yesterday’s call, staff had an action item to provide a redline revision of the Initial Report reflecting agreed updates to Recommendations 3-9 (see pages 18-24), as well as a strawman draft of the new
Recommendation 2 and response to Charter Question A7. The redline is attached. The Recommendation 2 strawman is available
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e8iG6FmRD0M5VlMUrmIedPw3burqfxLXQrkubxDJ3oQ/edit">
here</a>.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="xmsonormal" style="margin:0cm;caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-variant-caps: normal;orphans: auto;text-align:start;widows: auto;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;word-spacing:0px">
<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Please carefully review these documents in coordination with the groups you represent. If you feel that there are items that need to be revised,
<b>please enter them <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d7KwQH6poIxrafFYc5_1e1jQiiCA4WHqdNuRrx2IfWY/edit">
here</a></b>. For each item, please include:</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="xmsolistparagraph" style="color:black;margin-top:0cm;margin-bottom:0cm;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo6">
<span lang="EN-US">Report version (the date listed in the header of the document) and applicable line numbers ( these are listed along the left margin of the document).</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="xmsolistparagraph" style="color:black;margin-top:0cm;margin-bottom:0cm;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo6">
<span lang="EN-US">Name and group you represent: If multiple WG members represent a group, input should be in coordination with these other members.</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="xmsolistparagraph" style="color:black;margin-top:0cm;margin-bottom:0cm;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo6">
<span lang="EN-US">Rationale: please provide a clear explanation for why you are proposing the revision.</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="xmsolistparagraph" style="color:black;margin-top:0cm;margin-bottom:0cm;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo6">
<span lang="EN-US">Specific proposed revision: Provide the language you would like to see added/removed/edited.</span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="xmsonormal" style="margin:0cm;caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-variant-caps: normal;orphans: auto;text-align:start;widows: auto;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;word-spacing:0px">
<b><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">The deadline for submitting input is 30 November 2022.</span></b><span class="apple-converted-space"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">After the deadline, the
working group will discuss the items submitted in the input document. Following review of those items, the text will be considered stable.
</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="xmsonormal" style="margin:0cm"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Please do not hesitate to reach out with any questions about the review process.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Kind regards,</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> Caitlin, Julie, Berry, and Emily</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Emily Barabas</span><span style="color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Policy Development Support Senior Manager</span><span style="color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)</span><span style="color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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