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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Thank you, Jim, Rick, and Beth. This item will be added to the input tracking document</span><b><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">
</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"><a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1d7KwQH6poIxrafFYc5_1e1jQiiCA4WHqdNuRrx2IfWY/edit__;!!PtGJab4!5MLXskHJV8QtTRioYXp2H6q-Wf6xhgmaCBDuE_ADH6mEJKlwTOsvqMjwCva-HuVSqfzgsEvaVs09mY3K8fHkwiCc2kb2MSDOCQ$">here
[docs.google.com]</a>.<b><o:p></o:p></b></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Emily<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">James Galvin <jgalvin@identity.digital><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, 1 December 2022 at 03:07<br>
<b>To: </b>Emily Barabas <emily.barabas@icann.org><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"gnso-tpr@icann.org" <gnso-tpr@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Ext] Re: [GNSO-TPR] Input Due 30 November: Draft Revisions to Recommendations 2-9<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">The following comment is from the Registry Stakeholder Group review of the redline of Recommendations 1-9<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">The redlined text currently has the following proposed recommendation:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Preliminary Recommendation xx: The Registry Operator MUST provide the Gaining Registrar’s IANA ID to the Losing Registrar, which will enable the Losing Registrar to provide this information in the [Losing FOA
and] Notification of Transfer Completion.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Registries note that the discussion text included guidance on how and when this should be done and we believe it is important to include this guidance in the recommendation. We propose the following revised text
for consideration.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Preliminary Recommendation xx: The Registry Operator MUST provide the Gaining Registrar’s IANA ID in the notification of a pending transfer request to the Losing Registrar, which will enable the Losing Registrar
to provide this information in the [Losing FOA and] Notification of Transfer Completion.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Note the insertion of the phrase “in the notification of a pending transfer request”.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">The RySG representatives are prepared to discuss this and answer any questions as needed.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Jim, Rick, and Beth<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">On 16 Nov 2022, at 12:18, Emily Barabas wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="xmsonormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Dear working group members,</span><span style="color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">As discussed on yesterday’s call, staff had an action item to provide a redline revision of the Initial Report reflecting agreed updates to Recommendations 3-9 (see pages 18-24), as well as a strawman draft of the new
Recommendation 2 and response to Charter Question A7. The redline is attached. The Recommendation 2 strawman is available
<a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1e8iG6FmRD0M5VlMUrmIedPw3burqfxLXQrkubxDJ3oQ/edit__;!!PtGJab4!5MLXskHJV8QtTRioYXp2H6q-Wf6xhgmaCBDuE_ADH6mEJKlwTOsvqMjwCva-HuVSqfzgsEvaVs09mY3K8fHkwiCc2kaREi4MUA$">
here [docs.google.com]</a>.</span><span style="color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Please carefully review these documents in coordination with the groups you represent. If you feel that there are items that need to be revised,
<b>please enter them <a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1d7KwQH6poIxrafFYc5_1e1jQiiCA4WHqdNuRrx2IfWY/edit__;!!PtGJab4!5MLXskHJV8QtTRioYXp2H6q-Wf6xhgmaCBDuE_ADH6mEJKlwTOsvqMjwCva-HuVSqfzgsEvaVs09mY3K8fHkwiCc2kb2MSDOCQ$">
here [docs.google.com]</a></b>. For each item, please include:</span><span style="color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="xmsolistparagraph" style="color:black;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span lang="EN-US">Report version (the date listed in the header of the document) and applicable line numbers ( these are listed along the left margin of the document).</span><span lang="EN-US">
</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="xmsolistparagraph" style="color:black;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span lang="EN-US">Name and group you represent: If multiple WG members represent a group, input should be in coordination with these other members.</span><span lang="EN-US">
</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="xmsolistparagraph" style="color:black;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span lang="EN-US">Rationale: please provide a clear explanation for why you are proposing the revision.</span><span lang="EN-US">
</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="xmsolistparagraph" style="color:black;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span lang="EN-US">Specific proposed revision: Provide the language you would like to see added/removed/edited.</span><span lang="EN-US">
</span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">The deadline for submitting input is 30 November 2022.</span></b><span class="apple-converted-space"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">After the deadline, the
working group will discuss the items submitted in the input document. Following review of those items, the text will be considered stable.</span><span style="color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="xmsonormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Please do not hesitate to reach out with any questions about the review process.</span><span style="color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Kind regards,</span><span style="color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> Caitlin, Julie, Berry, and Emily</span><span style="color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Emily Barabas</span><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Policy Development Support Senior Manager</span><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)</span><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#777777"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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