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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">As a reminder, please provide your feedback on the latest redline edits to the recommendations no later than</span><b><span lang="EN-US"> Monday 23 January</span></b><span lang="EN-US">. Please focus your attention on
the specific draft redlines made to recommendations 10-22 for this round of review. Additional details are below.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Caitlin, Berry, Julie, and Emily<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">From:
</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Emily Barabas <emily.barabas@icann.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, 16 January 2023 at 13:04<br>
<b>To: </b>"gnso-tpr@icann.org" <gnso-tpr@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Reminder: Input Due 23 January: Draft Revisions to Recommendations 10-22<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">As discussed on our last call, there has been an extension on the deadline to review the latest redline edits to the recommendations (see attached).
<b>Your input is now due on Monday 23 January</b>. As a reminder, please focus your attention on the specific draft redlines made to recommendations 10-22 for this round of review. If you have any questions, please share them on list.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Caitlin, Berry, Julie, and Emily<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">From:
</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">GNSO-TPR <gnso-tpr-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Emily Barabas <emily.barabas@icann.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, 21 December 2022 at 12:02<br>
<b>To: </b>"gnso-tpr@icann.org" <gnso-tpr@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[GNSO-TPR] Input Due 16 January: Draft Revisions to Recommendations 10-22<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="xmsonormal" style="margin:0cm"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Dear working group members,</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">As discussed on yesterday’s call, staff had an action item to provide an updated redline revision of the Initial Report reflecting agreed updates to Recommendations 10-22 (see pages 26-39), as well as revisions resulting
from the last round of input on the previous redline and strawman (see highlighted text on pages 17-19, 21, and 24). The document is attached.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Please carefully review this document in coordination with the groups you represent. If you feel that there are items that need to be revised,
<b>please enter them<a href="https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1Zoh8D2GuulpIDbyqwYsfRCSJkiGpa19k02eiEE-tWnE/edit?usp=sharing__;!!PtGJab4!_TIiHSRIccfRXNW5DGzOXjtn0enphXExIv2BzjcXcBrQiS9o-D2r-TyeLN8E4bWb76LM05wbkjBpkj4YVu622i4viWSNEgZayw$">
here [docs.google.com]</a>. </b>For each item, please include:</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="xmsolistparagraph" style="color:black;margin-top:0cm;margin-bottom:0cm;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span lang="EN-US">Report version (the date listed in the header of the document) and applicable line numbers ( these are listed along the left margin of the document).</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="xmsolistparagraph" style="color:black;margin-top:0cm;margin-bottom:0cm;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span lang="EN-US">Name and group you represent: If multiple WG members represent a group, input should be in coordination with these other members.</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="xmsolistparagraph" style="color:black;margin-top:0cm;margin-bottom:0cm;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span lang="EN-US">Rationale: please provide a clear explanation for why you are proposing the revision.</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="xmsolistparagraph" style="color:black;margin-top:0cm;margin-bottom:0cm;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span lang="EN-US">Specific proposed revision: Provide the language you would like to see added/removed/edited.</span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">The deadline for submitting input is 16 January 2023.</span></b><span class="apple-converted-space"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">After the deadline, the
working group will discuss the items submitted in the input document. Following review of those items, the text will be considered stable.
</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="xmsonormal" style="margin:0cm"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Please do not hesitate to reach out with any questions about the review process.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Kind regards,</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"> Caitlin, Julie, Berry, and Emily</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Emily Barabas</span><span style="color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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