[Internal-cg] Charter commenting - ALAC Comments ( Updated Charter Draft )

[Joe Alhadeff]

Mohamed: 

If the content is correct (taking into account Milton's concern), but its written in a less efficient way than possible, is redrafting an efficient use of our time? We have lots of other outstanding issues like what consensus means that I would rather focus on... 

Joe 
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From: mbashir at mbash.net 
To: mueller at syr.edu 
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Sent: Friday, August 8, 2014 3:05:39 PM GMT -05:00 US/Canada Eastern 
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Charter commenting - ALAC Comments ( Updated Charter Draft ) 






Milton, 

ALAC review of the current charter draft concluded that the document need to be shorten and redrafted while at the same time maintain the main principles/objectives of the document . 

your comments regarding releation to ICANN accountability enhancement work is noted, i will wait for further comments from ICG regarding this approach. 

Regards, 
Mohamed 












On Fri, Aug 8, 2014 at 5:30 PM, Milton L Mueller < mueller at syr.edu > wrote: 






Mohamed 

This is not an updated charter it is a completely re-written charter. 

As such, it moves us backwards, not forwards. I also note that it lacks the critical language about the ICG’s relationship to the other enhanced accountability process and thus is non-negotiably unacceptable to my stakeholder group and, I suspect, to all the other DNS-based representatives. I would encourage ALAC to start with the draft that we worked on and provide commentary on those parts that it feels are inadequate, unclear or missing. 



--MM 






From: internal-cg-bounces at icann.org [mailto: internal-cg-bounces at icann.org ] On Behalf Of Mohamed El Bashir 
Sent: Friday, August 08, 2014 6:36 AM 
Cc: ICG 
Subject: [Internal-cg] Charter commenting - ALAC Comments ( Updated Charter Draft ) 












Dear Colleagues, 

While ICG is finalizing the setup and publication of charter comments process, which i hope it can be published as as soon possible. 

I would like to provide you with ALAC comments on the draft ICG charter, ALAC has discussed been discussing the charter and we are proposing the attached updated charter document. 

The current draft charter is a too long document ( 6 pages ), not easy to ready and could be subject to different interpretations. The attached ALAC draft is one page only summarizing the charter objectives, attempting to make it easy to read and digest. 



It has contain ALAC comments in the latest charter draft. 





Thanks 




Kind Regards, 
Mohamed 
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