[Internal-cg] Further RFP revision

[Milton L Mueller]

Paul:
Done. It is uploaded as docx as version 09. Also proposed some minor clarity changes to the preamble and added a comment responding to Martin's nervousness. We can't have Martin being nervous. 

Milton L Mueller
Laura J and L. Douglas Meredith Professor 
Syracuse University School of Information Studies
http://faculty.ischool.syr.edu/mueller/ 



> -----Original Message-----
> From: internal-cg-bounces at icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-
> bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Paul Wilson
> Sent: Tuesday, August 19, 2014 10:05 AM
> To: ICG
> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Further RFP revision
> 
> Milton, thanks for your comments on the "section 0" part.  this adds some
> needed clarity about the whole orientation of this process.
> 
> If you can, please make further edits to the version 8 document linked
> below.
> 
> Paul.
> 
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> On 19 Aug 2014, at 9:30 pm, Paul Wilson <pwilson at apnic.net> wrote:
> 
> > Apologies for the delay, a new RFP revision is now online:
> >
> >
> https://www.dropbox.com/s/4d2izh5jobgyu48/IANA%20Transition%20RFP%
> 20v08.docx
> >
> >
> > Paul
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > On 19 Aug 2014, at 8:52 pm, Paul Wilson <pwilson at apnic.net> wrote:
> >
> >> Dear all,
> >>
> >> I am in the process of reconciling all inputs on the latest RFP document,
> and will have a clean version available in Dropbox shortly.
> >>
> >> My intention is to go run this document sequentially during tonight's
> meeting, seeking ICG members' views and suggestions.
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >>
> >> Paul.
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
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