[Internal-cg] Further RFP revision

[joseph alhadeff]

I have uploaded v9(jha) with a few suggested edits to further clarify 
the operational vs impacted communities comment process... Also a 
question of whether testing should be limited to Section III - are those 
the only changes contemplated that could impact stability and functionality?

I think we are getting pretty close to a final draft...

Joe
On 8/19/2014 11:05 AM, Milton L Mueller wrote:
> Paul:
> Done. It is uploaded as docx as version 09. Also proposed some minor clarity changes to the preamble and added a comment responding to Martin's nervousness. We can't have Martin being nervous.
>
> Milton L Mueller
> Laura J and L. Douglas Meredith Professor
> Syracuse University School of Information Studies
> http://faculty.ischool.syr.edu/mueller/
>
>
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: internal-cg-bounces at icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-
>> bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Paul Wilson
>> Sent: Tuesday, August 19, 2014 10:05 AM
>> To: ICG
>> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Further RFP revision
>>
>> Milton, thanks for your comments on the "section 0" part.  this adds some
>> needed clarity about the whole orientation of this process.
>>
>> If you can, please make further edits to the version 8 document linked
>> below.
>>
>> Paul.
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>> On 19 Aug 2014, at 9:30 pm, Paul Wilson <pwilson at apnic.net> wrote:
>>
>>> Apologies for the delay, a new RFP revision is now online:
>>>
>>>
>> https://www.dropbox.com/s/4d2izh5jobgyu48/IANA%20Transition%20RFP%
>> 20v08.docx
>>>
>>> Paul
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>>> On 19 Aug 2014, at 8:52 pm, Paul Wilson <pwilson at apnic.net> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Dear all,
>>>>
>>>> I am in the process of reconciling all inputs on the latest RFP document,
>> and will have a clean version available in Dropbox shortly.
>>>> My intention is to go run this document sequentially during tonight's
>> meeting, seeking ICG members' views and suggestions.
>>>> Thanks,
>>>>
>>>> Paul.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
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