[Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?

Alissa Cooper alissa at cooperw.in
Thu Aug 28 22:09:56 UTC 2014


Elise found a couple of instances where I failed to insert “functions” or
“functions operator.” Those have been corrected in the attached/dropbox
v14-alc.

Alissa

On 8/28/14, 2:59 PM, "Milton L Mueller" <mueller at syr.edu> wrote:

> You have my support to publish it as a stable draft.
> As noted on the call, I circulated it among my SG and so far the only concern
> expressed was related to the issue JJ raised and has been rectified in v 14.
> --MM
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> From: internal-cg-bounces at icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at icann.org] On
> Behalf Of Alissa Cooper
> Sent: Thursday, August 28, 2014 5:37 PM
> To: ICG
> Subject: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?
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> 
> In the RFP v14-alc (attached and in dropbox, with track changes both on and
> off), I’ve incorporate the suggestion made by Jean-Jacques, as amended by
> Milton. I’ve added the footnote providing the definition of IANA and gone
> through to change “IANA” to “IANA functions operator” where appropriate, as
> suggested by Daniel. I split Section V into two separate sections, one for
> implications and one for NTIA requirements, as suggested by Lynn. I clearly
> marked this document as a draft. I did some editorial clean-up and removed the
> comments as well (I realize there may still be some discussion ongoing related
> to some of the comments, but it sounded on the call as if those were not
> blocking the publication of the draft).
> 
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> 
> I have only seen agreement (or silence) on the list concerning the above
> changes, so I’m thinking this version might be ready to publish as a stable
> draft prior to the IGF. The only item missing is the link to the centralized
> information portal, which the secretariat is working on.
> 
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> 
> Are there any objections to publishing this as a draft (and having the
> secretariat host it on our web site and make an announcement about its
> existence) by Sept 1?
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> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Alissa
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