[Internal-cg] Charter version 4

[joseph alhadeff]

Jari:

Thanks, this version is improved, but I think still fails to properly 
treat the non-operational communities.  I have provided language related 
to categorizing communities as those which have operational 
relationships with IANA and those that may be impacted by those 
relationships.  This is an important distinction as it will play a role 
in who requirements for proposals are directed at.  That being said 
there also remains a need to specifically call out the role and 
consultation process with those impacted groups in the creation of the 
proposal.

Proposed language already was submitted in my version Daft 4 on these 
topics.

Joe
On 7/18/2014 3:06 AM, Jari Arkko wrote:
> Version 4 after a breakfast meeting with Milton, Mary, and Alissa.
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> We have I believe gone through all comments (in some cases making our own version of the suggested change, however).  Change marks are turned on in the document, so you see what has been done. The scope language edited yesterday by the group has also been included (with small edits from Milton).
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> We can discuss this further in the group meeting today.
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> Thanks, all.
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> Jari
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