[Internal-cg] Requirements for Community Proposals

Milton L Mueller mueller at syr.edu
Fri Jul 18 17:07:08 UTC 2014


Paul, 
I looked over this and found a need for some serious copy editing and some missing questions about accountability. 
See my modifications attached. 

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From: internal-cg-bounces at icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Paul Wilson
Sent: Friday, July 18, 2014 12:10 PM
To: Coordination Group
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Requirements for Community Proposals

Dear all,

As agreed, we should finalise this document in the next 2 weeks - so it can be ready for IGF, along with charter and scope. 

I'm happy to hold the edit token, and ask you for any comments by early next week (say by end of Tuesday wherever you are).  

I'll take the comments and get new version to you by the end of next week.

thanks,

Paul.

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