[Internal-cg] Redraft of RFP

Paul Wilson pwilson at apnic.net
Thu Jul 31 22:39:41 UTC 2014


Hi Milton,

are you still planning to send a revision?    I don’t have anything form you so far.

Thanks,

Paul.


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On 26 Jul 2014, at 2:47 am, Milton L Mueller <Mueller at syr.edu> wrote:

> Paul,
> I still think this needs work. 
> I will submit an edited version as soon as I can. My main issue is twofold:
> 
> A) In many ways this is too specific, and the specificity reflects assumptions about the nature of the proposals we will get that may not be applicable in certain situations. E.g., when you talk about the "frequency" of an accountability mechanism you seem to be assuming some kind of committee-style oversight similar to the ATRT, and excluding other kinds of accountability mechanisms, such as appeals processes or structural solutions which do not rely on such committees. In some ways, this template needs to be made more generic. 
> 
> B) Section 3 on oversight does not distinguish adequately between oversight of policy development and oversight of implementation. 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: internal-cg-bounces at icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Paul Wilson
> Sent: Friday, July 25, 2014 12:04 AM
> To: ICG Internal
> Subject: [Internal-cg] Redraft of RFP
> 
> Thanks to comments from a few of you, here's a further draft of the RFP.
> 
> My feeling is that a very structured approach is needed, and I hope that we can gather all the needed information in this way.  From the IP addressing community, I think we could provide a detailed and complete response in this format, but other will need to be able to do so too.  
> 
> I hope this is useful.
> 
> Paul.
> 




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