[Internal-cg] Announcement

[Jari Arkko]

I have no strong opinion on this, but made some edits on the Dropbox, see the -jar file.

The main change is softening the deadline language a little bit (given that we’ve not really sent the timeline for negotiation to the communities yet - or have we?)

Jari

On 06 Sep 2014, at 12:56, joseph alhadeff <joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com> wrote:

> Some proposed edits to the announcement...
> On 9/6/2014 5:21 AM, Paul Wilson wrote:
>> thanks, now on dropbox…
>> 
>> ________________________________________________________________________
>> Paul Wilson, Director-General, APNIC                      <dg at apnic.net>
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>> See you at APNIC 38!                      http://conference.apnic.net/38
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>> On 6 Sep 2014, at 7:18 pm, Jon Nevett <jon at donuts.co> wrote:
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>>> Paul:  Some suggested changes in the attached.  Best, Jon
>>> <Announcement v1jn.docx>
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