[Internal-cg] Consensus document - for discussion Sept 17
alissa at cooperw.in
Wed Sep 17 00:39:56 UTC 2014
Attached and in Dropbox are the versions we will use on the call on Sept 17:
ICG Guidelines for the Decision Making-v12-MU-ALC-JA-ALC.docx
ICG Guidelines for the Decision Making-v12-MU-ALC-JA-ALC-clean.docx
All of the changes since v12-MU-ALC are editorial (mostly typo fixes and
white space deletions), except one: on page 1, I added the text suggested by
Joe about public comment periods. The editorial fixes include the
suggestions made by Joe, Wolf-Ulrich, Kavouss, and Milton (off-list).
If people spot further editorial issues prior to the call, please send them
in email to the mailing list, rather than editing the document directly, and
I will incorporate them prior to the call.
On 9/16/14, 5:14 AM, "joseph alhadeff" <joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com> wrote:
> Alissa, Colleagues:
> The draft is acceptable as is - thanks for your work on editing... I have
> proposed a few non-substantive edits to improve understanding - for example
> use of public comment forum may be read not to include written comments,
> propose replacing forum with consultation, etc.
> One possible addition might be a reaffirmation of our commitment to
> consultation which should be differentiated from our 7 day period for
> decisions... Possible language which could be added to making decisions could
> ICG will make all reasonable efforts to enable member stakeholder
> communities to have appropriate time to consult with their members on issues
> on which the ICG will make substantive decisions. Where appropriate and
> practicable, public comment periods will also be provided .
> On 9/16/2014 4:40 AM, Kavouss Arasteh wrote:
>> I am at another meeting
>> I have read your edited text which seems to cover most or almost every
>> Please let me to ck it again and come back to you
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