[Internal-cg] Steps for handling ICG forum comments ..

[Manal Ismail]

Dear Mr. Arasteh ..

 

Many thanks for your comments which matches my initial suggestion ..

Yet I thought a different way forward was agreed at the meeting as a compromise, which was helpfully summarized by Joe in his email to the list (attached for your convenience) ..

Anyway, as mentioned earlier, I’m flexible with either ..

 

Kind Regards

--Manal

 

From: Kavouss Arasteh [mailto:kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com] 
Sent: Sunday, February 22, 2015 9:05 PM
To: Manal Ismail
Cc: Daniel Karrenberg; Coordination Group
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Steps for handling ICG forum comments ..

 

Dear Manal,

Thank you very much for the good work that was done.

I was identified to be part of small group on the matter.

There are some inconsistencies that I HAVE EDITED.

Moreover, there are overlapping and superflous paragraphs that while is harmless but do not seem necessary.

However, I have not touched that .

See attachment with revision marks 

Regards

Kavouss 

 

 

2015-02-22 16:28 GMT+01:00 Manal Ismail <manal at tra.gov.eg>:

Many thanks Daniel for your response and your cooperation ..
In case of no other comments, appreciate if our chair and co-chairs can
put this into action ..

Kind Regards
--Manal


-----Original Message-----
From: Daniel Karrenberg [mailto:daniel.karrenberg at ripe.net]
Sent: Friday, February 20, 2015 2:23 PM
To: Manal Ismail; internal-cg at icann.org
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Steps for handling ICG forum comments ..

On 17.02.15 13:06 , Manal Ismail wrote:
> Dear All ..
>
> Please find attached stepsfor handling community comments received on
> ICG Forum..
>
> I hope this accuratelyreflectsthe discussion we had in Singapore ..
>
> I have createda new document as it describes a different approach and
> was too messy intrack changes ..
>
> The old draft is still on Dropbox, if you wishto reference..
>
> I have to clarify that this has not been discussed yet among the
> smaller group agreed in Singapore, but is being shared for the sake of
time ..
>
> Hope to have this settled soon ..
>
> Kind Regards
>
> --Manal



Manal,


thank you very much for driving this along.

"Handling community comments submitted to the ICG Forum Discussion Draft
based on Singapore Meeting
11 February 2015 - V.1"

is excellent and I recommend that we adopt it.

Daniel
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