[IOT] IOT - Review of the Red Line document

[Susan Payne]

All
With thanks to Liz for the redline of amendments as against our IOT agreed clean copy, and to Bernard for updating the Google Doc so that it reflects that redline.

Our next meeting will be next week on 13 February.  Please review the redlines in advance of that meeting and if you have comments or proposed edits that you would like considered on Tuesday's call please make them in advance in Suggestion Mode in the document by 1800 UTC on Monday 12 February so that everyone should have had some opportunity to consider them prior to the call, allowing us to come to agreement.  I would suggest you prioritise looking at Rule 3 and Rule 4 as we will start at the beginning of the document and work our way through.

Many thanks

Susan

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From: IOT <iot-bounces at icann.org> On Behalf Of Bernard Turcotte via IOT
Sent: Wednesday, February 7, 2024 1:41 PM
To: Bernard Turcotte via IOT <iot at icann.org>
Subject: [IOT] IOT - Red Line of document

All,

The red line of the document can be found at:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zkFNUtiasdfsFIG_p-D67o_1ZJzYcZUkIbcCD1l9jWU/edit?usp=sharing

Please use SUGGESTION mode to make your comments.

As usual if you have any issues accessing the document please let me know.
Thank You.

Bernard Turcotte
ICANN Support to the IOT

For

Susan Payne
Chair IOT

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