[IRT.RegDataPolicy] Review alternate language for Section 8 & 9 regarding Transfer

[Dennis Chang]

Dear IRT,

Per your request at the last IRT meeting, the alternate languages have been inserted in the OneDoc for your review.
You’ll note new policy languages are offered for the two sections regarding Transfer.
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Review alternative language for Section 8 & 9 - Transfer <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SVFkoI6RmrVVz--RrVLSOj1bmz1qLb7_JTuvt7At4Uo/edit#heading=h.kl6hzyrnknox>

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When we were trying to gain understanding of the recommendations, it was useful to separate the data elements in section.
Based on feedback from those who are not tracking our progress as closely as we have been, we are seeing if we can make the language simpler and easier to follow.

Section 8 & 9 review are on the agenda for our next IRT meeting.

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Kind Regards,
Dennis S. Chang
GDD Programs Director
Phone: +1 213 293 7889
Sykpe: dennisSchang
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