[IRT.RegDataPolicy] [Ext] RE: IRT Task 204 Review Revosed Addendum II inOneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation 20220419

[Dennis Chang]

Hi Sarah,

Thanks for the question.
You are correct, the text before the box is no longer considered and entirely replaced by the text in the box.
I darkened the text to be replaced and commented for clarity.

Thanks
Dennis Chang

From: Sarah Wyld <swyld at tucows.com>
Date: Monday, April 18, 2022 at 07:41
To: Dennis Chang <dennis.chang at icann.org>, "Dennis Chang via IRT.RegDataPolicy" <irt.regdatapolicy at icann.org>
Subject: [Ext] RE: [IRT.RegDataPolicy] IRT Task 204 Review Revosed Addendum II inOneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation 20220419

Hi Dennis,

Is the text in the box the entire new text, and the text before the box is no longer to be considered? Or does the box replace some of the preceding text?

Thanks,





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Sarah Wyld, CIPP/E



Policy & Privacy Manager

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swyld at tucows.com<mailto:swyld at tucows.com>

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From: Dennis Chang via IRT.RegDataPolicy<mailto:irt.regdatapolicy at icann.org>
Sent: April 11, 2022 5:04 PM
To: Dennis Chang via IRT.RegDataPolicy<mailto:irt.regdatapolicy at icann.org>
Subject: [IRT.RegDataPolicy] IRT Task 204 Review Revosed Addendum II inOneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation 20220419

Dear IRT,

Thanks for you input on the Addendum II.
Based on your feedback, we’ve revised the wording for better clarity of the implementation requirements.
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Review Revised Addendum II in OneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1SVFkoI6RmrVVz--RrVLSOj1bmz1qLb7_JTuvt7At4Uo/edit__;!!PtGJab4!oqmhH-KD_GxdmtZYV7Hv_IXbxj6x_H8Ljn-Oy7pcTl1ndXcmp66Q072JIKhbk-4K5g4vYaST$>

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Btw, you’ll note that the next IRT meeting has been rescheduled to next week.
We are currently working to revise the Addendum I and the Section 10; again based on your helpful inputs.
We’ll need a bit more time to formulate the language and a corresponding logic map to facilitate your review.
I’ll send out another IRT task when ready.

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Kind Regards,
Dennis S. Chang
GDD Programs Director
Phone: +1 213 293 7889
Sykpe: dennisSchang
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