[ispcp] NEW VERSION - ISPCP Draft Comments on US Government ICANN MoU Inquiry

[Anthony Harris]

OK with me, thanks Mark.

Tony Harris

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Mark McFadden" <mcfadden at 21st-century-texts.com>
To: <ispcp at icann.org>
Sent: Monday, July 17, 2006 11:04 AM
Subject: [ispcp] NEW VERSION - ISPCP Draft Comments on US Government ICANN 
MoU Inquiry


> All:
>
> Here is version 1.3 of the ISPCP Response to the Department of
> Commerce's Request for Comments on the ICANN MoU. Once again, I have
> attached it in Microsoft Word and PDF formats.
>
> Here are the substantial changes in the document:
>
> - I have incorporated Greg's suggested text about formalizing the
> administration of the root servers in section 2.5 (page 4);
> - I have changed the words "tragic attempt" to misguided attempt" in the
> discussion of weighted voting in section 2.4;
> - I have tried to clarify the goal of improving existing relationships
> with other related Internet organizations in some text in section 2.7;
> - After Tony's comment, I have removed the text related to the NRO in
> section 2.2 and 2.4;
>
> I'd be very happy to have further comments from the Constituency for a
> final draft. I'd like to send our comments to Commerce in the next 48
> hours so please "Reply All" with comments as soon as you are able.
>
> mark
>
> Mark McFadden
> Secretariat
> ISPCP Constituency
>