[NCAP-Discuss] [Ext] NCAP Report Rough Draft Doc

[Michael Puckett]

Hello all,

The consolidated draft report is mostly complete, pending a final review I’m planning to do after updating the Board Questions doc. Please consider the documents “Sections 1-3” and “Sections 4-5” as artifacts as outstanding items have been addressed in the new rough draft document, located here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cwuo6g_Nm2-fAuexFNs2maj8W5CWGuVEyWwvNiy3xCA/edit

The work that remains is updating the Board Questions document (https://docs.google.com/document/d/17C342jQVjtx98NxWM7GBZAjVktY-Ipgl63u7mWURq18/edit) to account for changes made to the report. I see that some DG members have reviewed the Board Questions doc and given their input on what changes are needed. Thank you for your contributions.

I’ve realized that the Board Questions require more work to align with the report than I previous anticipated. If you can join a zoom meeting to discuss the Board Questions doc, please let me know. I’d gladly accept guidance from the DG.

Thank you,
Michael Puckett
Technical Writer, ICANN

From: Michael Monarrez Puckett <monarrez4565 at gmail.com>
Date: Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 7:09 AM
To: "ncap-discuss at icann.org" <ncap-discuss at icann.org>
Cc: Michael Monarrez Puckett <monarrez4565 at gmail.com>, Michael Puckett <michael.puckett at icann.org>
Subject: [Ext] NCAP Report Rough Draft Doc

Hello everyone!
I sent this email around 05:00 UTC, but I may have inadvertently sent it to the ncap-bounce email address. My apologies.
After resolving the various open items for the report (woo-hoo!), we’re finally at a place where we can bring together sections 1-5 and appendices into a single document. Congratulations to you all on your (rough) rough draft! :)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cwuo6g_Nm2-fAuexFNs2maj8W5CWGuVEyWwvNiy3xCA/edit [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1cwuo6g_Nm2-fAuexFNs2maj8W5CWGuVEyWwvNiy3xCA/edit__;!!PtGJab4!9UAlq1q-E2OtMeZJVBWKLIL342-ns7OC9WEffu0ZfstQf4NtvfKrX0AIyYDUjsBwMN-NqE52G_sCWWwV2om26B_f9HnnK7GDeA$>
There is text I’ve written in Secs. 3.5, 4.6, 5.3, 5.5, and 5.7. Additionally, I’ve updated Sec. 3.6 based on input from various members regarding privacy considerations.
Between today and Wednesday (around 18:00 UTC), I’ll be copy editing the document (and verifying references, updating links, etc.). If you have any suggestions or comments, please make sure they will not result in substantive changes.
I will be sending out a similar email with the “rough draft” of the Board Questions doc later today after making updates to get your eyes on it. This is the current Board Questions doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/17C342jQVjtx98NxWM7GBZAjVktY-Ipgl63u7mWURq18/edit [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/17C342jQVjtx98NxWM7GBZAjVktY-Ipgl63u7mWURq18/edit__;!!PtGJab4!9UAlq1q-E2OtMeZJVBWKLIL342-ns7OC9WEffu0ZfstQf4NtvfKrX0AIyYDUjsBwMN-NqE52G_sCWWwV2om26B_f9HkHid-clA$>
Please turn your attention to the Board Questions document and the new Study Two report rough draft for final review before delivery to SSAC. I would recommend using email and Google Docs comments to communicate input. Any topics that cannot be resolved by email before our weekly meeting will be the agenda items I bring forward, but I’m hoping we will have minimal open issues by then.
Thanks,
Michael Puckett
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