<div dir="ltr"><div>I note that Casey has added very long sections to the Ethical Considerations section. These new paragraphs are substantive in nature and should NOT be presented for public comment as observations agreed upon by the Discussion Group. If Casey feels that these concerns should be raised in Study 2 (since some of them were previously voiced by some), then I think we could create an Appendix to Study 2 which provides Ethical Considerations to be taken into account by the TRT in the exercise of its discretion - but only as long as other technical folks on the call agree with the manner in which the concerns have been expressed. <br></div><div><br></div><div>I thought the consensus was around the fact that (1) the TRT should have a certain amount of discretion around which tools to use - that is after the application of the first couple of tools and (2) we in the DG are not privacy experts.</div><div><br></div><div>So I strongly object to including all this new text in the basic report. If some version can be agreed by the technical experts that would operate as an Appendix to Study 2 as suggested guidance to the TRT when exercising its discretion, that would be ok with me. Mention of the Menlo Report should be in that Appendix and not in the main body of Study 2 as it has never been discussed by this group. <br></div><div><br></div><div>Anne<br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><div><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div>Anne Aikman-Scalese</div>GNSO Councilor<div>NomCom Non-Voting 2022-2024</div><div><a href="mailto:anneicanngnso@gmail.com" target="_blank">anneicanngnso@gmail.com</a></div></div></div></div><br></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Fri, Jan 5, 2024 at 9:01 AM Michael Puckett <<a href="mailto:michael.puckett@icann.org">michael.puckett@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div class="msg-2004749174318463035">
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hello all,<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I’ve created a document with <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W-pil0kd4WsHGykDTCKcMCMWa3OcTCyhLyb9f2Khm-E/edit?usp=drive_link" target="_blank">
action items</a> for the DG in the shared folder (NCAP Discussion Group > Draft Finalization - 2024-01-19). Please review these action items and provide your input before the meeting on January 10.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Here’s another link to the document: <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W-pil0kd4WsHGykDTCKcMCMWa3OcTCyhLyb9f2Khm-E/edit?usp=drive_link" target="_blank">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W-pil0kd4WsHGykDTCKcMCMWa3OcTCyhLyb9f2Khm-E/edit?usp=drive_link</a><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Among the action items are bookmarks to various sections within the report documents to review:<u></u><u></u></p>
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<li class="m_-2004749174318463035MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in">Outstanding comments<u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_-2004749174318463035MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in">Short textual updates<u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_-2004749174318463035MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in">Long text additions<u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_-2004749174318463035MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in">References<u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_-2004749174318463035MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in">Links to report documents (Secs. 1-3, Secs. 4-5, & Board Questions)<u></u><u></u></li><li class="m_-2004749174318463035MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in">Notes for most recent meeting (2024-Jan-3, taken by me)<u></u><u></u></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you!<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Michael Puckett<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">ICANN Technical Writer<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><a href="mailto:michael.puckett@icann.org" target="_blank">michael.puckett@icann.org</a><u></u><u></u></p>
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