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<div id="divRplyFwdMsg" dir="ltr"><font face="Calibri, sans-serif" style="font-size:11pt" color="#000000"><b>From:</b> Npoc-discuss <npoc-discuss-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Carlos Raul Gutierrez <carlosraul@gutierrez.se><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, October 22, 2019 2:00 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> npoc-discuss@icann.org <npoc-discuss@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Npoc-discuss] One last review before sending our charter to ICANN staff</font>
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<p>Hello Raoul!</p>
<p>Thanks for your efforts. I understand the importance of a transparent registration process. And of course, pricing is a key element not only for the initial registration but also for maintaining the domain over time. What I don't fully grasp is putting both
together with an "and" in the middle. I don't have an alternative suggestion at the time but can think of a better structure of what you have already stated:</p>
<p><<<We want to encompass all operational concerns, including all</p>
<p>* technical (R<span style="background-color:transparent; font-variant-numeric:normal; font-variant-east-asian:normal; font-size:11pt; font-family:Arial; color:#000000; vertical-align:baseline; white-space:pre-wrap">egistration,
</span><span style="background-color:transparent; font-variant-numeric:normal; font-variant-east-asian:normal; font-size:11pt; font-family:Arial; color:#000000; vertical-align:baseline; white-space:pre-wrap">Security, Stability, and Resiliency)</span>, </p>
<p>*legal (<span style="background-color:transparent; font-variant-numeric:normal; font-variant-east-asian:normal; font-size:11pt; font-family:Arial; color:#000000; vertical-align:baseline; white-space:pre-wrap">Domain Name Fraud, Intellectual Property Abuse,
Privacy), </span></p>
<p>* and economic (initial Pricing and renewal conditions)</p>
<p>implications of registering, holding and using TLDs for the stated purposes of non-profits >>> </p>
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<p>For what it is worth</p>
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<p id="x_reply-intro">El 2019-10-21 08:37, Raoul Plommer escribió:</p>
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<div>Our new charter is finally at the stage, where we will send it to staff to do their own review. Here it is: <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HRcUOxtoMUzJnfXhXm-wpJd3vDmVRG9uFTRyojOAbxo/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HRcUOxtoMUzJnfXhXm-wpJd3vDmVRG9uFTRyojOAbxo/edit?usp=sharing</a></div>
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<div>If no new comments have arrived to it by Friday (25.10.), we'll send it off to staff before our F2F meeting in Montreal.</div>
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<div>The only bit that was changed since the last iteration, was the mission. Here's the new version:<br>
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"<span style="background-color:transparent; font-variant-numeric:normal; font-variant-east-asian:normal; font-size:11pt; font-family:Arial; color:#000000; font-weight:bold; vertical-align:baseline; white-space:pre-wrap">1.2
</span><span style="background-color:transparent; font-variant-numeric:normal; font-variant-east-asian:normal; font-size:11pt; font-family:Arial; color:#000000; vertical-align:baseline; white-space:pre-wrap">NPOC's mission is to represent Not-for-Profit Organizations
by addressing their operational concerns with the generic Top-level Domains (gTLDs). Operational Concerns are defined as issues arising from the use of the gTLDs by the not-for-profit organizations to achieve their own mission. Those can include but are not
limited to Domain Name Fraud, Intellectual Property Abuse, Privacy, Security, Stability, and Resiliency, as well as transparent registration
</span><span style="font-variant-numeric:normal; font-variant-east-asian:normal; font-size:11pt; font-family:Arial; color:#000000; background-color:#ffff00; vertical-align:baseline; white-space:pre-wrap">process and pricing</span><span style="background-color:transparent; font-variant-numeric:normal; font-variant-east-asian:normal; font-size:11pt; font-family:Arial; color:#000000; vertical-align:baseline; white-space:pre-wrap">
and continued ownership of domain names."</span></div>
<div><span style="background-color:transparent; font-variant-numeric:normal; font-variant-east-asian:normal; font-size:11pt; font-family:Arial; color:#000000; vertical-align:baseline; white-space:pre-wrap"> </span></div>
<div><span style="background-color:transparent; font-variant-numeric:normal; font-variant-east-asian:normal; font-size:11pt; font-family:Arial; color:#000000; vertical-align:baseline; white-space:pre-wrap">The only change to it from older versions was the highlighted
part "process and pricing", as we felt it'd be good to specify what kind of transparency we'd want. Supposedly, without the specification, one could think we'd want the registrants' information to be public. That's not what we want.</span></div>
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