[RDS-WHOIS2-RT] REVIEW NEEDED: ICANN62 Engagement Session Description

[Carlton Samuels]

+1 to Cathrin's.

-Carlton


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*Carlton A Samuels*

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On Tue, May 29, 2018 at 1:06 AM, <Cathrin.BAUER-BULST at ec.europa.eu> wrote:

> Dear all,
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> Some small edits proposed in the text below (in bold and red) to clarify
> 1) the "this" in the second sentence and 2) that this engagement session is
> one opportunity to provide feedback (i.e., there will be more) just to
> avoid misunderstanding.
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> All best
>
> Cathrin
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> *From:* RDS-WHOIS2-RT [mailto:rds-whois2-rt-bounces at icann.org] *On Behalf
> Of *Jean-Baptiste Deroulez
> *Sent:* Monday, May 28, 2018 10:15 PM
> *To:* RDS WHOIS2-RT List
> *Subject:* [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] REVIEW NEEDED: ICANN62 Engagement Session
> Description
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> Dear Review Team members,
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> Following the action item identified today on plenary call #28
> <https://community.icann.org/x/MgMFBQ>, please review the below updated
> ICANN62 engagement session description and confirm by *tomorrow, Tuesday
> 29 May 2018 23:59 UTC* whether you have any edits/comments.
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> *Join a discussion with the Registration Directory Service Review team
> (RDS-WHOIS2). *
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> *The Registration Directory Service Review, formerly known as "WHOIS"
> (RDS-WHOIS2) is mandated by the ICANN Bylaws**.**, this**The scope of its
> work** includes assessing how the recommendations of the first WHOIS
> Review were carried out, as well as assessing the effectiveness of the gTLD
> registry directory service and whether its implementation meets the
> legitimate needs of law enforcement, promoting consumer trust and
> safeguarding registrant data. The RDS-WHOIS2 Review Team will update the
> community on its findings to date and seek input on its findings as well as
> address any questions pertaining to its scope and work plan. This is *
> *your** one opportunity for you* *to provide input into the RDS-WHOIS2
> work. *
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> *For more information, please visit the RDS-WHOIS2 wiki
> https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/RDS-WHOIS2+Review/
> <https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/RDS-WHOIS2+Review/>. *
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> *Learn more about opportunities to participate in RDS-WHOIS2 work at:
> https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/Observers
> <https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/Observers>. *
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> In absence of comments/edits, the ICANN62 engagement session description
> will be considered approved.
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> Kind regards,
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> Jean-Baptiste
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