[RSSAC Caucus] [Ext] RSSAC002v5: New title for section 3.1

Russ Mundy mundy at tislabs.com
Wed Mar 8 22:12:21 UTC 2023


+1 to Paul - I think these changes take care of the problem we discussed in our last meeting.

Russ

> On Mar 7, 2023, at 1:19 PM, Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman at icann.org> wrote:
> 
> On Mar 7, 2023, at 1:57 AM, Andrew McConachie <andrew.mcconachie at icann.org> wrote:
>> 
>> Dear RSSAC Caucus Members,
>> 
>> I’ve made edits to Section 3.1 in alignment with the new title. 
>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/187k3b64DgkeCM6ib6ny6Ok7LzNxdT_v5X6FE0l0hdZ0/>
>> 
>> I also corrected the reference in Section 5.
>> 
>> Please review the new language in Section 3.1.
> 
> The new language looks good, and I like Dessalegn's change as well.
> 
> --Paul Hoffman
> 
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