[Rt4-whois] WHOIS Public Comments - for your review

[Smith, Bill]

This looks good, though I would like to suggest a change to the definition of Consumer. I would change the following: "and Users (e.g. individuals, commercial or non-commercial entities who use the data legitimately) of the WHOIS data" to "and, Users (e.g. individuals, commercial or non-commercial entities who use the data legitimately) of the WHOIS data, and non-Users.

I believe this accurately captures our intention for "All global Internet users".

On Mar 1, 2011, at 4:41 AM, Kathy Kleiman wrote:

Hi All,
There was a little help from Alice – tx you, Alice!   If everyone could please review the public comment in preparation for our meeting tomorrow, we would appreciate it. Further, if the subteams could please check their materials to ensure that we used the most recent version of everything, we would appreciate it!

Thanks so much,
Kathy

From: rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org<mailto:rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org> [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Alice Jansen
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Subject: [Rt4-whois] WHOIS Public Comments - for your review

Dear Review Team Members,

Please find attached a public comment draft announcement for your review and consideration in anticipation of your conference call scheduled for tomorrow.

Kindly note that this was drafted and approved by Kathy and Emily.

Many thanks in advance,

Very best regards

Alice
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