[Rt4-whois] Letter to Compliance (Additional Edit)

[Emily Taylor]

Hi James

Thanks for bringing this on.  I have gone through the draft, and accepted
most of your changes.  I have also developed the text in some areas to
reflect your comments.  Please take a look and see if they address your
concerns.

You have rightly pointed out that some of our comments are directed more to
the community in general, and I think you're right to ask for them to be
taken out of this letter.  I think that, instead, we should keep hold of
them for the full report, because they highlight important failings in the
system, notably a wasteful lack of a joined up approach with regard to
studies.  Studies are commissioned in one area of the community (eg gNSO).
If those studies highlight issues for another area eg for operational
improvements, then I believe it is appropriate for the corporation to
review and direct corporate resources to respond and make improvements.  At
the moment, the downside of the decentralised, distributed nature of the
process (which otherwise has many benefits) is that it is possible for
everyone in the "supply chain" to shrug their shoulders and say it's
someone else's responsibility.

Let's talk further about this - we don't want to saddle the corporation
with an obligation to respond to everything that happens, but where there
is significant spend (eg a budget request that requires board approval),
then there should be board consideration of the results, and a workstream
that flows from it within a predictable time period.

So, what I've done is move that deleted text into a separate document, so
that we don't forget to make these points in the full report.

I attach both documents, and look forward to further comments on the list.

Kind regards

Emily



On 11 November 2011 21:40, James M. Bladel <jbladel at godaddy.com> wrote:

> Version du jour for Nov 11 (Attached)
>
> Note that I changed the statistical figures, and moved the chart below the
> narrative.  Some phrases were better directed at other organs (e.g., GNSO
> or ICANN Community) so I either changed or removed those.
>
> Thanks--
>
> J.
>
>  -------- Original Message --------
> Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Letter to Compliance (Additional Edit)
> From: Emily Taylor <emily at emilytaylor.eu>
> Date: Fri, November 11, 2011 3:36 am
> To: "James M. Bladel" <jbladel at godaddy.com>
> Cc: RT4 WHOIS <rt4-whois at icann.org>
>
> Hi James
>
> Thanks, your text changes are very helpful.  I have also looked at your
> other comments throughout the text.  Would you like to propose alternative
> language to build on your comments?  I would appreciate it if you could do
> so.
>
> Kind regards
>
>
> Emily
>
>
> On 11 November 2011 05:15, James M. Bladel <jbladel at godaddy.com> wrote:
>
>> Team:
>>
>> Per our most recent call, I've made a few slight edits to the Letter to
>> Compliance (draft).  The changes are:
>>
>> *  Corrected "Registries and Registries" to read "Registries and
>> Registrars" in two instances.
>> *  Struck "regulated" and inserted "monitored."
>> *  Added bullet point noting the technical & operational challenges faced
>> by ICANN Compliance.  To ensure that this is appropriately attributed, I
>> put this squarely on my head (at minimum).
>>
>> Thank you,
>>
>> J.
>>
>>
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