[Rt4-whois] Rec 17 + Rec 3 - On behalf of Emily

[Alice Jansen]

Dear Review Team Members,

On behalf of the Review Team Chair, please find attached new language proposed by Emily for recommendations 3 and 17 (consistent with action items list).
Please review in anticipation of today's call scheduled for 21:00 UTC.

Thanks,

Kind regards

Alice
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REMINDER – action items list

 *   Revive call schedule (calls to take place on Wednesdays once a week; first call to take place on Wed, 28 March) – Alice
 *   Review and submit language of recs 5-9 (Data Accuracy) by 28 March - Susan
 *   Review comments submitted to the Team and Denise's recommendation tracking document – All
 *   Propose alternative language for Proxy and Privacy recommendations by 28 March -  James + Susan + Peter + Seth
 *   Hold the pen on rec. 3 strategic priority by 28 March -- Emily
 *   Find text of accreditation by 28 March -- Kathy
 *   Work on language of rec. 17 by 28 March -- Emily
 *   Review language of recs. on IDNs by 28 March-- Sarmad + Kathy + Wilfried + Michael
 *   Review your chapters and send redline to Seth + Omar + Alice by 21 March-- All
 *   Review body of text in light of comments and integrate changes suggested/required by Members-- Seth + Omar
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