[Rt4-whois] flip last two recommendations?

[Kathy Kleiman]

Hi All,
What a tour de force!  It's really coming together. Thanks for all the 
hard work of everyone on the call last night.

Quick question: can we flip the final two recommendations, and make a 
one word change -- the word tables?  I think it may mean something 
different in different cultures. In the US, if you "table" a motion, you 
put it aside and don't act on it. Since we certainly want people to act 
on it here, I would like to propose the words  "provides" or "lays out" 
instead.

Best, Kathy

CURRENT ==>
Recommendation 15:  Annual Status Reports
ICANN should provide at least annual written status reports on its 
progress towards implementing the recommendations of this WHOIS Review 
Team. The first of these reports should be published one year, at the 
latest, after ICANN tables the implementation plan mentioned in 
recommendation 16. Each of these reports should contain all relevant 
information, including all underlying facts, figures and analyses.

Recommendation 16:  Detailed and Comprehensive Plan
ICANN should provide a detailed and comprehensive plan within 3 months 
after the submission of the Final WHOIS Review Team report that outlines 
how ICANN will move forward in implementing these recommendations.


OFFERED ==>
Recommendation 15:  Detailed and Comprehensive Plan
ICANN should provide a detailed and comprehensive plan within 3 months 
after the submission of the Final WHOIS Review Team report that outlines 
how ICANN will move forward in implementing these recommendations.

Recommendation 16:  Annual Status Reports
ICANN should provide at least annual written status reports on its 
progress towards implementing the recommendations of this WHOIS Review 
Team. The first of these reports should be published one year, at the 
latest, after ICANN /*tables */the implementation plan mentioned in 
*/recommendation 15, above/*. Each of these reports should contain all 
relevant information, including all underlying facts, figures and analyses.


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