<div dir="ltr">Hi all,<div><br></div><div>Here are my notes on the current Topic #30 draft paper:<div><br></div><div>First paragraph should state that government 'sensitivities' or national laws must be specified in the Early Warning.</div><div><br></div><div>Delete fn. 2. Why should Org be allowed to unilaterally extend this time period on its own whim?</div><div><br></div><div>Change this sentence: The GAC Early Warning notice <strike>may</strike> <b>must </b>include a nominated point of contact for
further <strike>information</strike> <b>consultation with the applicant.</b></div><div><br></div><div>Clarify this last sentence re EWs: Governments
issuing Early Warnings must include a written explanation describing <b>1) </b>why the GAC Early
Warning was submitted, <b>2) how specific national laws and/or sensitivities are implicated,</b> <b>3) </b>how the applicant may address the GAC member’s concerns, <strike>if
applicable, as well as</strike> <b>and, 4) </b><strike>identify the</strike> <b>all </b>objecting countries <b>and the nominated contact from each</b>.<br clear="all"><div><img width="0" height="0" class="chq-track-image" alt="" style="display:flex; border: 0; width: 0px; height: 0px" src="https://www.cloudhq-mkt4.net/mail_track/mail/e9193e69e13af44084_1702964383226?uid=147358"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div style="font-family:arial;font-size:small"><br></div><div style="font-family:arial;font-size:small">The paragraph at fn 6 and 7 needs to be reworked - bad grammar.</div><div style="font-family:arial;font-size:small"><br></div><div style="font-family:arial;font-size:small">This is not right: "The applicant will have a period of 21 calendar days from the time the Board acknowledges
receipt of the advice in which to submit a response." The time period should be longer than 21 days (as it would typically take much longer than that to meet with government reps), and should not be keyed from a time unknown to the applicant. Also bad grammar.</div><div style="font-family:arial;font-size:small"><br></div><div style="font-family:arial;font-size:small">Best,</div><div style="font-family:arial;font-size:small">Mike</div><div style="font-family:arial;font-size:small"><div dir="ltr" style="margin-left:0pt" align="left"><table style="border:none;border-collapse:collapse"><colgroup><col width="203"><col width="86"><col width="335"></colgroup><tbody><tr style="height:20.25pt"><td rowspan="4" style="border-right:0.75pt solid rgb(0,133,61);vertical-align:middle;padding:5pt;overflow:hidden"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;text-align:center;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap"><span style="border:none;display:inline-block;overflow:hidden;width:159px;height:95px"><img alt="Logo" src="https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/S_Oxvn9Vep0rF8IVyiOnDwA4LymtHrWirggIxlsU26JihhEYDv5A5D03ZY0k_npND2t8xfiWCdTM5NTO_LSZMksjO_UlJm5IAP3FEi5cw96AwIPgVzvoOfHIux_qNA26n5UuxvQZ" width="159" height="95" style="margin-left:0px;margin-top:0px"></span></span></p></td><td colspan="2" style="border-left:0.75pt solid rgb(0,133,61);vertical-align:top;padding:5pt;overflow:hidden"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-left:3.6pt;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(0,133,61);background-color:transparent;font-weight:700;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">Mike Rodenbaugh</span></p></td></tr><tr style="height:18pt"><td style="vertical-align:top;padding:5pt;overflow:hidden"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-left:3.6pt;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:9.5pt;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(0,133,61);background-color:transparent;font-weight:700;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">address:</span></p></td><td style="vertical-align:top;padding:5pt;overflow:hidden"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.53;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:9.5pt;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">548 Market Street, Box 55819</span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.53;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:9.5pt;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">San Francisco, CA 94104</span></p></td></tr><tr style="height:12.75pt"><td style="vertical-align:top;padding:5pt;overflow:hidden"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-left:3.6pt;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:9.5pt;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(0,133,61);background-color:transparent;font-weight:700;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">email:</span></p></td><td style="vertical-align:top;padding:5pt;overflow:hidden"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.53;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:9.5pt;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap"><a href="mailto:mike@rodenbaugh.com" target="_blank">mike@rodenbaugh.com</a></span></p></td></tr><tr style="height:24pt"><td style="vertical-align:top;padding:5pt;overflow:hidden"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-left:3.6pt;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:9.5pt;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(0,133,61);background-color:transparent;font-weight:700;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">phone:</span></p></td><td style="vertical-align:top;padding:5pt;overflow:hidden"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.53;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="font-size:9.5pt;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">+1 (415) 738-8087</span></p></td></tr></tbody></table><b>WORLD TRADEMARK REVIEW "WTR 1000" Top Global TM Counsel</b></div><div style="margin-left:0pt" align="left"><b>2012 to present [<a href="https://www.cloudhq.net/meeting/stTkgqqvVTxS40EySIJv" target="_blank">Book a Meeting</a>]</b></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><br></div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Mon, Dec 18, 2023 at 6:00 AM Next Round Policy Implementation <<a href="mailto:NextRound_PolicyImplementation@icann.org">NextRound_PolicyImplementation@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div class="msg-1783640395921201630">
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Meeting #23<span class="m_-1783640395921201630apple-converted-space"> </span><span style="color:black">of the<span class="m_-1783640395921201630apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:black">SubPro<span class="m_-1783640395921201630apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span style="color:black">IRT
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