[Ws2-jurisdiction] Updated "Applicable Law and Choice of Venue Provisions" Recommendation

[Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch]

Dear Greg,

In the pdf this is not clear.

Are these changes made in your capacity as rapporteur? or are they personal contributions?

I guess they are the latter. In such case this should be made clear in order to avoid any misunderstandings.

I note for the record that I find troublesome that (without making that clear) you are once again intervening in an open discussion within the group taking very specific positions, instead of letting the debate go forward and helping it reaching consensus when needed.

I cannot speak for Raphaêl of course, bit I wonder why you "revert" to his initial text, which I had suggested to amend aiming at a "common ground" I saw emerging, when Raphaël himself had not done so or had not objected to my suggestions.

Hence, I would like to see the document distributed without your changes or if you insist to circulate the version you have changed that you clearly identify your edits as your personal opinion.

best

Jorge


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Von: Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com>
Datum: 27. September 2017 um 07:40:41 MESZ
An: Cancio Jorge BAKOM <Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch>
Cc: ws2-jurisdiction <ws2-jurisdiction at icann.org>
Betreff: Re: [Ws2-jurisdiction] Updated "Applicable Law and Choice of Venue Provisions" Recommendation

Jorge,

Yes.  This is reflected in the Google Doc, and if you mouse over the changes in Word.

Greg

On Wed, Sep 27, 2017 at 1:39 AM, <Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch<mailto:Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch>> wrote:
Dear Greg,

The changes in "red ink" are from you?

Thanks for clarifying.

regards

Jorge


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Von: Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com<mailto:gregshatanipc at gmail.com>>
Datum: 27. September 2017 um 07:33:38 MESZ
An: ws2-jurisdiction <ws2-jurisdiction at icann.org<mailto:ws2-jurisdiction at icann.org>>
Betreff: [Ws2-jurisdiction] Updated "Applicable Law and Choice of Venue Provisions" Recommendation

All,

Attached is an updated version of this recommendation in Word and PDF formats, found at https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xAyla8FTaL7jZ0D2rYtAzQUr3gEnirTKiAG-kqD0ZSs/edit?usp=sharing (please make all changes in SUGGEST mode).

Please review and be prepared to discuss.

Thank you.

Greg