[Ws2-transparency] Revised Transparency Doc

[Samantha Eisner]

Dear Michael and the Transparency team,

Attached please find ICANN Legal¹s proposed updates to the three
recommendations that were the subject of our discussion with the
rapporteur.

Thanks, 

Sam
‹ 
Samantha Eisner
Deputy General Counsel, ICANN
12025 Waterfront Drive, Suite 300
Los Angeles, California 90094
USA
Direct Dial: +1 310 578 8631





On 10/4/17, 10:34 AM, "ws2-transparency-bounces at icann.org on behalf of
Michael Karanicolas" <ws2-transparency-bounces at icann.org on behalf of
michael at law-democracy.org> wrote:

>Hi all,
>
>Just writing to remind of today's call, which will be at 1900 UTC, to
>discuss the attached draft recommendations.
>
>Best,
>
>Michael
>
>On Thu, Sep 28, 2017 at 10:03 AM, Michael Karanicolas
><michael at law-democracy.org> wrote:
>> Hi all,
>>
>> I am attaching a revised transparency document, for discussion at next
>> week's meeting, which has the revised language incorporated into the
>> recommendations. All changes from the previous draft are tracked.
>>
>> Still no word back from ICANN legal regarding their thoughts on the
>> re-worked language - but hopefully we'll hear back before the meeting
>> on Wednesday.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Michael

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