[AT-Review] Preliminary Report
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Fri May 14 03:23:45 UTC 2010
Thanks Fabio. Will incorporate your edits.
From: Fabio Colasanti [mailto:fabio at colasanti.it]
Sent: Thursday, May 13, 2010 11:21 PM
To: at-review at icann.org
Subject: [AT-Review] Preliminary Report
Many thanks. The new version is much more readable.
Just two remarks. We indicate that the RT has adopted a working definition
of accountability (under "Discussion of proposed Conceptual Framework").
It might be useful to add it in a footnote. If I were a reader I would
like to know now which one has been retained.
Along the same lines, when we say that the RT has adopted a methodology we
should have either a link or an indication of where this document is to be
found (too long to add here).
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