[AT-Review] New draft WG4 for ATRT call

[Brian Cute]

Manal,

 

Thank you for reviewing the document and making these edits.  I believe
(hope) that I captured all of them in the final draft.

 

Best,

Brian

 

From: Manal Ismail [mailto:manal at tra.gov.eg] 
Sent: Monday, October 25, 2010 9:18 AM
To: briancute at afilias.info; at-review at icann.org;
ugasser at cyber.law.harvard.edu; Caroline Nolan; rfaris at cyber.law.harvard.edu
Subject: RE: [AT-Review] New draft WG4 for ATRT call

 

Dear Brian ..

With respect to WG4 report, there are 2 minor typos on page 5 of the
attached version (which was the last version you circulated but does not
reflect the cc discussions), those are:  

" Midterm Review of the review of the Joint Project Agreement (JPA) " 

" Recommendation 2.8: Establish and additional mechanism for the community "

Also regarding the draft master that was already sent to the translation
(I'm not sure if it's too late but I believe it won't harm even for the
final version), I have revised the document, checking for any typos,
unfortunately only pages 25 thu 38, starting WG2 report .. 

Please find attached with typos marked in track changes .. 

 

Kind Regards

 

--Manal 

 

From: at-review-bounces at icann.org [mailto:at-review-bounces at icann.org] On
Behalf Of Brian Cute
Sent: Monday, October 25, 2010 12:43 PM
To: at-review at icann.org; ugasser at cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline Nolan';
rfaris at cyber.law.harvard.edu
Subject: [AT-Review] New draft WG4 for ATRT call

 

RT,

 

Attached is an updated version of WG4 for our call.  It includes:

 

-          The WG4 section of the Executive Summary with the Recommendation
language proposed by Manal;

-          The WG4 Findings section with edits proposed by Warren and edits
I proposed (which Olivier endorsed in his email today)

-          The WG4 Recommendation language proposed by Manal.

 

Regards,

Brian

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