[atrt2] LAST CHANCE FOR EDITS!

[Alan Greenberg]

Attached are my comments.

I would appreciate seeing a copy of the report once the WHOIS 
templates are inserted into Appendix B, but before it is shipped out. 
I may not be at my computer, so either send me an SMS at 514-516-3853 
or call me at 514-483-3853 to let me know it is sent.

Alan

At 10/10/2013 05:56 PM, Brian Cute wrote:
>Review Team,
>
>Attached is the latest draft of the Report and 
>Recommendations.  Please carefully note the following:
>
>1.  Provide only SUBSTANTIVE AND CRITICAL edits you may have on the 
>SUBSTANCE of the draft within 24 hours, or by 10:00p.m. UTC tomorrow.
>
>2.  Ignore edits concerning numbering, missing citations, spelling 
>etc.  Paul and I will continue over the next 24 hours to clean up 
>the document so clean, correctly numbered version will go out for 
>public comment.  We will take any substantive and critical edits 
>provided by 10:00p.m. UTC tomorrow and work them into the 
>document.  Our plan is to send the document to ICANN staff by 
>11:00p.m. UTC tomorrow to begin the translation process.
>
>3.  The Report will indicate that it is a draft that is subject to 
>change based on Community input and continuing assessment by ATRT2 
>before the Final Report and Recommendations issue.
>
>Thanks to all.
>
>Regards,
>Brian
>
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