[atrt2] ATRT2 Final Report - Draft #1

[Fiona Alexander]

Thank you Larissa.

One question with respect to new recommendation 9.  The topic is cross community deliberations but the recommendations focus exclusively on the GNSO and the GNSO pdp process.  On a call a few weeks this was raised and I thought adjustments were to be made to broaden this out?

Fiona
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From: atrt2-bounces at icann.org [atrt2-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Larisa B. Gurnick [larisa.gurnick at icann.org]
Sent: Tuesday, December 17, 2013 11:29 AM
To: ATRT2 (atrt2 at icann.org)
Subject: [atrt2] ATRT2 Final Report - Draft #1

Dear Review Team Members,
Attached is the Final Report – Draft #1 for your review.  It incorporates all changes submitted to date.  Staff would appreciate your review to ensure that your edits were accurately reflected in the report.

Several aspects of the report require further work:

·         Executive Summary language to be updated – ATRT2

·         Summary of public comment for several recommendations to be added – ATRT2

·         Synchronization of final recommendations between Executive Summary and body of the report - staff

·         Formatting clean up – Table of Contents update, links from Executive Summary to the body of the report, etc. - staff

Staff proposes that the Review Team discuss and resolve the following points during the upcoming call:

1.       Inclusion of Draft Recommendations, along with Final Recommendations, in the body of the report

2.       Boilerplate text if there's nothing to report for Public Comment section.  Paul’s suggestion:  "There were no specific public comments on this issue, and/or any comments received were in agreement with the Report's findings."

3.       Posting of Final Report – with or without translations?  In considering the timing, please note that ICANN  is closed for the holidays 24 December through 1 Jan and some staff may not be available during this time.

Best regards,

Larisa B. Gurnick
Consultant/Senior Director, Organizational Reviews
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
larisa.gurnick at icann.org<mailto:larisa.gurnick at icann.org>
310 383-8995