[atrt2] Final review

Lise Fuhr lise.fuhr at difo.dk
Sun Dec 29 16:21:02 UTC 2013

Hi Brian,


I confirm that the attached version, which Larisa sent to ATRT2 December 24,
includes the correct version of recommendation 12.






Fra: Brian Cute [mailto:bcute at pir.org] 
Sendt: 29. december 2013 11:57
Til: Lise Fuhr
Emne: Final review




I have completed final review, taking into account emails from the
Recommendation editors to ensure accuracy and consistency.  You offered some
questions in an email to Larisa as follows:  "I am not happy with the
changes Sabra made on page 12 to recommendation 12.4. I think the new
wording changes the recommendation too much. I furthermore don't understand
why the review team suddenly is a part of the recommendation. The changes
are not in the same recommendation on page 81. I prefer the "original"
version on page 81.  At page 79 there is a comment from [s36] about "whose
comments is this?"  The section referred to is a part of the section above
and is a part of the RySG comments to recommendation 12.4."


Would you kindly look at the latest version of the Report as sent to the
ATRT2 by Larisa and confirm whether your issues have been resolved.  If not,
please direct me to the specific language that must be modified.   Thank




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