[bc-gnso] Updated draft for approval on 14-Jan: BC comment on Strawman Solution

Mon Jan 14 13:10:20 UTC 2013

Dear Steve and all,

We agree with the BC comments and appreciate the work done by Steve and
other BC members on these issues.

We support these efforts and understand the need for implementation
improvements to RPMs to mitigate costs and risk to companies and consumers
and make RPMs more effective.

We are only attaching for your consideration some small suggested edits to
the introduction. The idea behind these suggestions is to use a
constructive and future oriented language approach.

Please feel free to just ignore our suggestions if they do not reflect the
way you/BC want/s to express or if not relevant.

Thanks a lot,

Gabi & Celia

eInstituto

*Gabriela Szlak *
Directora Iniciativas RED/ODR y eGobernanza
eInstituto

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>  From: Martin C SUTTON/HGHQ/HSBC at HSBC To: Steve DelBianco <
> sdelbianco at netchoice.org> Cc: bc - GNSO list <bc-gnso at icann.org>,
> owner-bc-gnso at icann.org Date: 14/01/2013 10:19 Subject: Re: [bc-gnso]
> Updated draft for approval on 14-Jan: BC comment on Strawman Solution Sent
> by: owner-bc-gnso at icann.org
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> Steve,
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> Great work, thank you.
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> Given the sensitivities around the term 'blocking' I've suggested
> amendments to one of the paragraphs, which I hope is helpful.
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> Kind regards,
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> Martin
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> Group Risk
> Manager, Group Fraud Risk and Intelligence | HSBC HOLDINGS PLC HGHQ
> Group Security & Fraud Risk
> 8 Canada Square,Canary Wharf,London,E14 5HQ,United Kingdom
> ________________________________________________________________
>
>    Phone +44 (0)20 7991 8074 / 7991 8074  Mobile +44 (0) 7774556680  Email
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>   From: Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco at netchoice.org>  To: bc - GNSO list <
> bc-gnso at icann.org>  Date: 14/01/2013 02:30  Subject: [bc-gnso] Updated
> draft for approval on 14-Jan: BC comment on Strawman Solution  Sent by:
> owner-bc-gnso at icann.org
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> The attached update is for discussion and final approval during our 14-Jan
> member call.
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> I've updated the original draft per suggestions from Ron Andruff, John
> Berard, Elisa Cooper, and Sara Deutsch. A redline is also attached to show
> those changes from the 2-Jan draft.
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> The BC will submit these comments on 15-Jan.  We will also be able to
> submit Reply comments thru 5-Feb.
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> From: *Steve DelBianco <*sdelbianco at netchoice.org*<sdelbianco at netchoice.org>
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> Date: *Wednesday, January 2, 2013 5:44 PM*
> To: *bc - GNSO list <*bc-gnso at icann.org* <bc-gnso at icann.org>>*
> Subject: *DRAFT for review: BC comment on Strawman Solution
>
> BC members:
>
> In Toronto , the BC/IPC/ISPC requested improved Rights Protection Measures
> (RPMs).  That prompted ICANN executive management to host follow-up
> meetings with multiple stakeholders.   As a result, ICANN posted a
> "strawman solution" for public comment (*link*<http://newgtlds.icann.org/en/about/trademark-clearinghouse/strawman-solution-03dec12-en.pdf>).
>    Public comments are due by 16-Jan-2013.
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> Attached is a draft BC comment on the Strawman solution, based on prior BC
> positions and discussions, email exchanges with BC members, and initial
> review by the ex comm.
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> Per the BC charter, this draft is posted for 14 days of review and
> comment.  As soon as possible, please REPLY ALL with your suggested edits
> to these comments.   If any BC member *objects* to the BC filing the
> attached draft comment , please REPLY ALL and indicate your objection and
> reason.
>
> We plan to finalize and submit these comments on 16-Jan-2013.
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> Steve DelBianco
> BC vice chair for policy coordination
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