[cc-humanrights] Final version of the flyer

[Stefania Milan]

Thanks for putting together the flyer!
I am also with Stephanie re: starting with Ruggies might be off-putting. We could start instead with the sentence "The session will discuss how ICANN can serve the public interest consistent
with human rights and what this means in practice", transforming it into a question (How can ICANN ...?)
I would also indicate the London and LA meetings with the corresponding number: ICANN 50 and ICANN 51, rather with the cities. 

In any case, never mind, really minor issues.
Thanks again!
Stefania




> On Feb 1, 2015, at 1:33 PM, Marilia Maciel <mariliamaciel at gmail.com <mailto:mariliamaciel at gmail.com>> wrote:
> 
> Thanks for caughting this typo Steph. I do not have strong feelings about the order of paragraphs. But I think it is very important that we have a final version of the flyer to approach SO/ACs and Fadi tomorrow. Could we close it today?
> Best wishes and nice Sunday to all.
> Marília
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> On Fri, Jan 30, 2015 at 12:23 PM, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca <mailto:stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca>> wrote:
> you need an "on" in the third para after discussion, and my earlier comments still apply....not a good idea to start with the ruggies....
> sorry to have missed the call, I have now signed up to the list (sorry I had thought I was on it)
> On 2015-01-30 8:20, Niels ten Oever wrote:
>>  Dear all,
>> 
>> Please find attached the final version of the flyer for ICANN & Human
>> Rights meeting at ICANN52.
>> 
>> Best,
>> 
>> Niels
>> 
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