[cc-humanrights] ICANN report integrated comments

[Marianne Franklin]

Dear all

I think I missed the Monday cutoff point. But just wanted to add my 
congratulations to Monica, and Niels et al for this fine piece of work. 
A lot has been deleted I see but I agree that the narrative has improved 
as a result: the additional efforts in accuracy and nuances with wording 
and terms really lift it up a level.

Looking forward to seeing the final, fully copy-edited (though pretty 
good so far, just a couple of tenses/conjugations left to deal with) 
report and also to the next steps of distribution and "sign-on" by the 
wider ICANN community.

I hope that BA is going, or has gone well.

best wishes
Marianne F

On 05/06/2015 21:10, Niels ten Oever wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> Thank you very much for you comments. We integrated them as well as we
> could. We will have a last editing session over the weekend and then we
> will make the final decisions on Monday before the report goes to the
> editor and designer on Tuesday.
>
> If you have any final comments it would be great if you could make them
> before Monday 12:00 (noon) UTC.
>
> Thanks in advance,
>
> Niels
>
>
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