[cc-humanrights] last call - infographic ICANN & Human Rights
Niels ten Oever
niels at article19.org
Fri Jun 17 12:46:46 UTC 2016
Dear all,
Please find attached the last version of the vizualization that we will
discuss in the call in a few hours.
I implemented all Kathy's changes, hunted down some typos and made it
overall cleaner.
Looking forward to discuss.
Best,
Niels
Niels ten Oever
Head of Digital
Article 19
www.article19.org
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On 06/17/2016 12:52 PM, Niels ten Oever wrote:
> Very valid point, great suggestion. Will implement :)
>
> PS Also found 9 little points yesterday after printing that are
> integrated in the next version (mostly typos and visual stuff)
>
> Niels ten Oever
> Head of Digital
>
> Article 19
> www.article19.org
>
> PGP fingerprint 8D9F C567 BEE4 A431 56C4
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>
> On 06/16/2016 10:56 PM, Kathy Kleiman wrote:
>> Hi Niels,
>>
>> Tx you for the continuing discussion. But still some confusion. For
>> example, the Rights Protection Mechanism WG is not also reviewing the
>> curative rights protection mechanisms for IGO and INGO or protection of
>> IGO and INGO identifiers in all gTLDs. These are Working Groups of their
>> own. (Way too much work for one group!)
>>
>> Might I suggest, and keeping in mind the suggestion of Marilia, that the
>> first "Rights Protection Mechanism WG" (over DNSSEC) delete "WG" and
>> include:
>>
>> Rights Protection Mechanisms -->
>>
>> - Review of the protection of International Organization Names in all gTLDs
>> -- ***
>> -- ***
>> - PDP to review all RPMs in all gTLDs
>>
>> Best, Kathy
>>
>> On 6/15/2016 3:47 AM, Niels ten Oever wrote:
>>> Hi all,
>>>
>>> Based on the previous comments, and new version attached. Looking
>>> forward to your comments.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Niels
>>>
>>> PS Thanks again Giulia for the great job and quick turnaround!
>>>
>>> Niels ten Oever
>>> Head of Digital
>>>
>>> Article 19
>>> www.article19.org
>>>
>>> PGP fingerprint 8D9F C567 BEE4 A431 56C4
>>> 678B 08B5 A0F2 636D 68E9
>>>
>>> On 06/14/2016 10:27 AM, Niels ten Oever wrote:
>>>> Thanks Marilia,
>>>>
>>>> This is great, a quick repsonse inline:
>>>>
>>>> On 06/10/2016 04:11 PM, Marilia Maciel wrote:
>>>>> Hi Niels and all,
>>>>>
>>>>> Congratulations to Niels and the team working on the visualisation. It
>>>>> is a great work and I find the infographic extremely informative. I have
>>>>> just a few observations:
>>>>>
>>>>> - The line that goes from the UDHR to second generation and then to
>>>>> particular instruments is not clear, because some of the instruments,
>>>>> like the ICCPR are part of the first generation of HR, while the ICESCR
>>>>> is indeed document that consolidates second generation rights. We need a
>>>>> different breakout if we want to speak of the generations.
>>>>
>>>> This is a big mistake of mine. Am very happy you caught it.
>>>>
>>>> Perhaps we could do this differently, because I am not sure how useful
>>>> it is to differentiate between different generations of rights.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> - On the human rights principles section, maybe it would be useful to
>>>>> mention the distinction from the responsibility to protect and respect,
>>>>> which is something mentioned in several occasions in our discussions in
>>>>> ICANN.
>>>>
>>>> Based on this and the previous remark I made a quick sketch, let me know
>>>> what you think (attached)
>>>>
>>>>> - Glossary: a) In INGOs there is a space missing and a typo in the word
>>>>> organisation.
>>>> Giulia (cc), can you take this up?
>>>>
>>>>> b) Add " DANE" to the glossary.
>>>> DANE: DNS-based Authentication of Named Entities
>>>>
>>>>> c) Put the glossary in
>>>>> alphabetic order.
>>>> Will do
>>>>
>>>>> - FoE stream: --> new gTLD program --> new gTLD subsequent round (WG).
>>>>> The WG is looking at a wide scope of issues, not only FoE and the title
>>>>> of the WG (new gTLD subsequent round) in column 3 is not explanatory of
>>>>> any particular FoE issue.
>>>> Let's change 'New gTLD programme' (in all instances) into 'New gTLD
>>>> subsequent procedures WG', and then drop the latter from the third column.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> - A suggestion came from CoE in the last ICANN meeting that we should
>>>>> rearrange the order in which we list the rights, maybe mirroring the
>>>>> order that they appear in the UDHR. I think it is a valuable suggestion.
>>>>> In any case, I would not start the list with due process, maybe it is
>>>>> good to start with a human right that is more widely " accepted" and
>>>>> understood in the ICANN space.
>>>>
>>>> OK, let's do the order of the second column like this:
>>>>
>>>> Right to Privacy (add: Right to)
>>>> Right to Freedom of Association (add: Right to)
>>>> Economic, social and cultural rights
>>>> Right to Freedom of expession (add: Right to)
>>>> Right to Security
>>>> Participation, includion, equality and non-discrimination
>>>> Due process
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> - Some of the ICANN policies of processes are actually active WGs. When
>>>>> this is the case, it would be good to indicate that clearly ex: new gTLD
>>>>> subsequent procedures WG, Rights protection mechanisms in all gTLDs WG,
>>>>> etc...
>>>> Agreed, let's add WG to these specific ones:
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Rights Protection Mechanism WG
>>>> New gTLD subsequent procedures WG
>>>>
>>>>> Reacting to Kathy's suggestion, I believe we should strictly follow the
>>>>> name of the policy or WG we are talking about. So, yes, if they have
>>>>> "Review" in the title, I would retain this word. But I would not add
>>>>> words like "balanced" if they are not in the official title.
>>>>>
>>>> I hope it adresses Kathy's concern if we add WG, so that it is clear we
>>>> use the official terms.
>>>>
>>>> I do share Kathy's concern about the naming of some WGs, but I don;t
>>>> think that is something we should address in this graph.
>>>>
>>>> We can change:
>>>>
>>>> Curative Rights protection for IGOs / INGOs
>>>>
>>>> into:
>>>>
>>>> Review of curative rights protections in IGO/INGOs in gTLDs
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> Once again, great job and looking forward to the discussion on the
>>>>> visualisation in Helsinki!
>>>>>
>>>> Thanks again,
>>>>
>>>> Niels
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> Best wishes,
>>>>> Marilia
>>>>>
>>>>> On Fri, Jun 10, 2016 at 1:48 PM, Kathy Kleiman <kathy at kathykleiman.com
>>>>> <mailto:kathy at kathykleiman.com>> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> Hi Niels and All,
>>>>>
>>>>> The Rights Protection Mechanism listing seem a little more directive
>>>>> than the other phrases -- and could be read to urge specific
>>>>> positions rather than just listing the ICANN proceedings that are
>>>>> looking at the issues. Can we be a bit more neutral in our
>>>>> phrasing? I would recommend:
>>>>>
>>>>> - Review of appropriate protections for IGOs/INGOs in gTLDs
>>>>>
>>>>> - Review of balanced curative rights protections in IGO/INGOs in gTLDs
>>>>>
>>>>> - Review of all rights protection mechanisms currently in gTLDs
>>>>>
>>>>> - Review of balanced rights protection mechanisms for future new
>>>>> gTLD rounds
>>>>>
>>>>> This will avoid misinterpretation... tx you!
>>>>> Best regards, Kathy
>>>>>
>>>>> On 6/7/2016 9:49 AM, Niels ten Oever wrote:
>>>>>> Dear all,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I have integrated your comments and suggestions as well as I could and I
>>>>>> think we have a very nice info-graphic right now that we can present in
>>>>>> Helsinki.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> So I would like to do a last call to see whether you all can live with this.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Of course this will remain a working document, but it would be great if
>>>>>> we can show this in Helsinki as work of the CCWP HR.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Looking forward to hear your comments, questions and/or suggestions.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Best,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Niels
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
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