[cc-humanrights] Two Public Comment Draft Documents

Ephraim Percy Kenyanito ephraim at article19.org
Tue Dec 13 17:17:50 UTC 2022


Hi Mallory,

Yes, we did.

Here are the final versions:-

Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Universal Acceptance Roadmap for 
Domain Name Registry and Registrar Systems:- 
https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Universal%20Acceptance%20Roadmap%20for%20Domain%20Name%20Registry%20and%20Registrar%20Systems%20%20-31-08-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)%20/Final%20CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20on%20Universal%20Acceptance%20Roadmap%20for%20Domain%20Name%20Registry%20and%20Registrar%20Systems%20-31-10-2022.pdf

Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Pilot Holistic Review Draft Terms 
of Reference:- 
https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Pilot%20Holistic%20Review%20Draft%20Terms%20of%20Reference-30-08-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)/Final%20CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20for%20Pilot%20Holistic%20Review%20Draft%20Terms%20of%20Reference-10-11-2022.pdf

Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Proposed Amendments to the SLA for 
the IANA Numbering Services:- 
https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Proposed%20Amendments%20to%20the%20SLA%20for%20the%20IANA%20Numbering%20Services-13-09-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)/CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20for%20Proposed%20Amendments%20to%20the%20SLA%20for%20the%20IANA%20Numbering%20Services-18-11-2022.pdf

Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Draft IANA and PTI FY24 Operating 
Plan and Budgets:- 
https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Draft%20IANA%20and%20PTI%20FY24%20Operating%20Plan%20and%20Budgets-15-09-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)/CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20for%20Draft%20IANA%20and%20PTI%20FY24%20Operating%20Plan%20and%20Budgets-17-11-2022.pdf

I will be sending an email shortly with a doodle poll for us to discuss 
more potential submissions for the future.

Best Regards,

Ephraim Percy Kenyanito

On 12/12/2022 20:15, Mallory Knodel via cc-humanrights wrote:
>
> Hi Ephraim,
>
> These are both great. They are short and to the point.
>
> Did they get submitted as comments already?
>
> -Mallory
>
> On 10/24/22 4:07 PM, Ephraim Percy Kenyanito via cc-humanrights wrote:
>>
>> Dear Colleagues,
>>
>>
>> I had volunteered during our last NCSG call to draft the first draft 
>> Human Rights Gap Analysis for two public comments, I have been lucky 
>> to be able to work on the drafts with two CCWP-HR members please find 
>> two drafts here:
>>
>> 1.
>>
>>     Universal Acceptance Roadmap for Domain Name Registry and
>>     Registrar Systems – 31 Oct-
>>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jX53V0I2XKuGnhgCHLAvoy9eHg8lQuks4U6oBQhJKZY/edit
>>
>> 2.
>>
>>     Pilot Holistic Review Draft Terms of Reference – 10 Nov-
>>     https://docs.google.com/document/d/10CK9s2r1WldKAOzZJvk35lkdQE5t8fa-JExnlJXUM4Y/edit
>>
>> We welcome your feedback.
>>
>> Please feel free to add any comments etc and I will be happy to share 
>> a second version ASAP.
>>
>>
>> --
>>
>> Best Regards,
>>
>> Ephraim Percy Kenyanito
>>
>> Public Policy Specialist/ Regulatory Affairs Specialist/ Project Manager-
>> International Trade, Technology, Media & Telecommunications Laws
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