[cc-humanrights] Human Rights Analysis of SSAD & ODA Reports

[Ephraim Percy Kenyanito]

Dear Mallory,

Thank you so much.

I have incorporated the changes as needed.

I really appreciate.

Best Regards,

Ephraim Percy Kenyanito

On 08/07/2022 20:00, Mallory Knodel wrote:
>
> Thanks for sharing, Ephraim. I've made some comments. Mostly I think 
> it's good and for wider reach perhaps just needs a bit more careful 
> introductory language for folks not that familiar with ICANN or its 
> WHOIS-tangential processes over the last 4+ years.
>
> Thanks!
>
> -Mallory
>
> On 6/15/22 12:50 PM, Ephraim Percy Kenyanito via cc-humanrights wrote:
>>
>> Dear CCWP-HR,
>>
>> Please find the prose document here: 
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XwC5YBDViRDME4Et7wzMchCkHe6z82V83Gpcb2dJ9k4/edit?usp=sharing
>>
>> Please feel free to add any comments.
>>
>>
>> --
>>
>> Best Regards,
>>
>> Ephraim Percy Kenyanito
>>
>> Public Policy Specialist/ Regulatory Affairs Specialist/ Project Manager-
>> International Trade, Technology, Media & Telecommunications Laws
>> Website: https://ekenyanito.com/
>> Twitter: @ekenyanito <https://twitter.com/ekenyanito>
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>> On 29/05/2022 15:23, Ephraim Percy Kenyanito wrote:
>>>
>>> Dear team,
>>>
>>> Hope you are all well.
>>>
>>> This is in reference to previous conversations on the topic.
>>>
>>> Franc (copied here in this email) has been helpful in looking 
>>> through the documents.
>>>
>>> Please find attached the analysis here: 
>>> https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1R0j8RwbUrxbPxVIe_5Hgc4CRNUaXkSoyZ-xXNF1N5h8/edit?usp=sharing 
>>>
>>>
>>> The document contains two sheets;
>>>
>>> First, EPDP HRIA- analyses the EPDP Phase 2 Recommendations which 
>>> inform the ODA Report.
>>>
>>> Second, ODA HRIA- analyses the ODA Recommendations which aims to 
>>> implement the EPDP Report.
>>>
>>>
>>> FYI- The ODA Report is informed by the EPDP Report though in some 
>>> instances ICANN might have misunderstood the EPDP Report and ICANN 
>>> Board wrote to the GNSO Council raising this questions:
>>>
>>> 1.
>>>
>>>     Whether the ODA has correctly interpreted the intent of the SSAD
>>>     recommendations in the proposed implementation;
>>>
>>> 2.
>>>
>>>     Whether the ODA has overlooked any key aspects of the SSAD
>>>     recommendations that should be factored in by the ICANN Board
>>>     when it considers the recommendations;
>>>
>>> 3.
>>>
>>>     Its view on the concerns identified by the ICANN Board and
>>>     potential options that could be considered, either in the form
>>>     of changes to the proposed implementation or the policy
>>>     recommendations themselves, to address these concerns (note,
>>>     these are expected to be high level suggestions at this stage);
>>>
>>> 4.
>>>
>>>     Any other aspects that help inform the Council’s deliberations
>>>     and consultation with the ICANN Board.
>>>
>>>
>>> For background here are the original documents that were being analysed:
>>>
>>> 1.
>>>
>>>     EPDP Phase 2 Final Report:
>>>     https://gnso.icann.org/sites/default/files/file/field-file-attach/epdp-phase-2-temp-spec-gtld-registration-data-2-31jul20-en.pdf
>>>
>>>
>>> 2.
>>>
>>>     ODA Final Report:
>>>     https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/ssad-oda-25jan22-en.pdf
>>>
>>> I look forward to your feedback as I begin working on the prose 
>>> report which I hope to complete the first version by June 7^th and 
>>> will be scheduled to be maximum 10 pages for transmission to the 
>>> board via NCSG (which CCWP-HR is seated).
>>>
>>> Please feel free to let me know in case of any questions.
>>>
>>>
>>> ---
>>>
>>> Best Regards,
>>>
>>> *EPK*
>>>
>>>
>>
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> -- 
> Mallory Knodel
> CTO, Center for Democracy and Technology
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