[cc-humanrights] Human Rights Analysis of SSAD & ODA Reports

[Mallory Knodel]

Thanks for sharing, Ephraim. I've made some comments. Mostly I think 
it's good and for wider reach perhaps just needs a bit more careful 
introductory language for folks not that familiar with ICANN or its 
WHOIS-tangential processes over the last 4+ years.

Thanks!

-Mallory

On 6/15/22 12:50 PM, Ephraim Percy Kenyanito via cc-humanrights wrote:
>
> Dear CCWP-HR,
>
> Please find the prose document here: 
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XwC5YBDViRDME4Et7wzMchCkHe6z82V83Gpcb2dJ9k4/edit?usp=sharing
>
> Please feel free to add any comments.
>
>
> --
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Ephraim Percy Kenyanito
>
> Public Policy Specialist/ Regulatory Affairs Specialist/ Project Manager-
> International Trade, Technology, Media & Telecommunications Laws
> Website: https://ekenyanito.com/
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> On 29/05/2022 15:23, Ephraim Percy Kenyanito wrote:
>>
>> Dear team,
>>
>> Hope you are all well.
>>
>> This is in reference to previous conversations on the topic.
>>
>> Franc (copied here in this email) has been helpful in looking through 
>> the documents.
>>
>> Please find attached the analysis here: 
>> https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1R0j8RwbUrxbPxVIe_5Hgc4CRNUaXkSoyZ-xXNF1N5h8/edit?usp=sharing 
>>
>>
>> The document contains two sheets;
>>
>> First, EPDP HRIA- analyses the EPDP Phase 2 Recommendations which 
>> inform the ODA Report.
>>
>> Second, ODA HRIA- analyses the ODA Recommendations which aims to 
>> implement the EPDP Report.
>>
>>
>> FYI- The ODA Report is informed by the EPDP Report though in some 
>> instances ICANN might have misunderstood the EPDP Report and ICANN 
>> Board wrote to the GNSO Council raising this questions:
>>
>> 1.
>>
>>     Whether the ODA has correctly interpreted the intent of the SSAD
>>     recommendations in the proposed implementation;
>>
>> 2.
>>
>>     Whether the ODA has overlooked any key aspects of the SSAD
>>     recommendations that should be factored in by the ICANN Board
>>     when it considers the recommendations;
>>
>> 3.
>>
>>     Its view on the concerns identified by the ICANN Board and
>>     potential options that could be considered, either in the form of
>>     changes to the proposed implementation or the policy
>>     recommendations themselves, to address these concerns (note,
>>     these are expected to be high level suggestions at this stage);
>>
>> 4.
>>
>>     Any other aspects that help inform the Council’s deliberations
>>     and consultation with the ICANN Board.
>>
>>
>> For background here are the original documents that were being analysed:
>>
>> 1.
>>
>>     EPDP Phase 2 Final Report:
>>     https://gnso.icann.org/sites/default/files/file/field-file-attach/epdp-phase-2-temp-spec-gtld-registration-data-2-31jul20-en.pdf
>>
>>
>> 2.
>>
>>     ODA Final Report:
>>     https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/ssad-oda-25jan22-en.pdf
>>
>> I look forward to your feedback as I begin working on the prose 
>> report which I hope to complete the first version by June 7^th and 
>> will be scheduled to be maximum 10 pages for transmission to the 
>> board via NCSG (which CCWP-HR is seated).
>>
>> Please feel free to let me know in case of any questions.
>>
>>
>> ---
>>
>> Best Regards,
>>
>> *EPK*
>>
>>
>
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