[Acct-Legal] Fwd: [WP1] Fwd: First Draft: WP1 content for Comment report on community powers & AOC

[Greg Shatan]

As mentioned in my prior email.

Greg
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From: Mathieu Weill <mathieu.weill at afnic.fr>
Date: Tue, Apr 7, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Subject: Re: [WP1] Fwd: First Draft: WP1 content for Comment report on
community powers & AOC
To: Jordan Carter <jordan at internetnz.net.nz>, León Felipe Sánchez Ambía <
leonfelipe at sanchez.mx>, Thomas Rickert <rickert at anwaelte.de>, wp1 at icann.org


 Hi Jordan, Colleagues,

I have reviewed the document and this is already a great step forward. I
attach some comments in the document.

Best
Mathieu



Le 07/04/2015 01:51, Jordan Carter a écrit :

Dear co-chairs,

 Please see attached - would welcome any feedback on the form and approach
in the material, length, level of detail, anything you like - please feel
welcome and I would encourage you to make any such feedbacks on the list.

 *In terms of the lawyers - Leon*, can you formally communicate this to the
lawyers, and ask them to be ready to comment or add their thoughts on the
lists, or on the call on Wednesday?

 Given this document is fairly short we haven't focused down on key
questions to ask the lawyers, this will be familiar to most of them.

The big outstanding question is the mechanism, and having no answer on that
will limit what they can say, I would think.

 cheers,
Jordan

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From: Jordan Carter <jordan at internetnz.net.nz>
Date: 7 April 2015 at 11:48
Subject: First Draft: WP1 content for Comment report on community powers &
AOC
To: "wp1 at icann.org" <wp1 at icann.org>


Dear WP1 colleagues,

 Attached in PDF and .docx the first draft of the content we have prepared
over the weekend to put in the Public Comment report.

 It covers community powers and AOC incorporation.

 Of course this is not yet perfect - we've done what we can in the very
tight timeframe to get first draft material together. Thanks to those
drafting team members who were able to set some time aside and add comments
and thoughts to the draft. Not everybody had the chance to due to some
document access issues, so I am sure our next iteration will be even better.

 This will be the main subject of our WP1 call on 8 April.

 *I would welcome and encourage comment or discussion on the list before
the meeting, as well as at the meeting.* We won't prepare an updated
version of this until after the WP1 call Wednesday, which will take the
discussion on the call into account.

 I will send this to the co-chairs and asking Leon to advance discussion /
consideration with the lawyers.


 *Staff - *please add this on the Wiki in the appropriate place.


 cheers,
Jordan

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