[Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan

[Nadira Alaraj]

Thank you Manal,
It is okay with me, I was just trying to avoid the repetition of the word
"initial" in the paragraph of phase 1.

On May 30, 2017 10:52 AM, "Manal Ismail" <manal at tra.gov.eg> wrote:

Thanks Nadira .. I’m fine with either “initial” or “preliminary”, but would
suggest that we use the same word in both the introductory paragraph and
bullet point 1., for consistency and for readers to understand that we are
referencing the same thing ..

Kind Regards

--Manal



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*Subject:* Re: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to
chartering organizations re. work plan



Dear Marika,

Thank you for the follow-up



I did some editing to the letter as the following:

-for phase 1.  Removed the capital letters; and suggest to replacement the
second “initial” with “preliminary”

-for phase 5. Added "phase" to the following brackets.  (as organized per
phase 1.);  put a comment for anther word (not sure of its grammer, English
is not my mother tongue).

-for Phase 6. I converted one "and" to &, then put a second “and”



Attached is the document with my suggested edits.



Best wishes,

Nadira





On Mon, May 29, 2017 at 5:42 PM, Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>
wrote:

Dear All,



Please find attached for your review the updated letter to the charter
organizations concerning the work plan and approach for dealing with the
charter questions. This version includes the revisions discussed during
last week’s meeting. If you have any further comments and/or edits, please
share these by Friday 2 June. Following that, staff will go ahead and
submit the letter on behalf of the CCWG leadership team to the chartering
organizations.



Best regards,



Marika



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