[Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan

Manal Ismail manal at tra.gov.eg
Tue May 30 08:36:20 UTC 2017

Many thanks Nadira for the clarification ..
I see your point but just felt that consistency may be important for first-time readers ..
Kind Regards

From: Nadira Alaraj [mailto:nadira.araj at gmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, May 30, 2017 10:26 AM
To: Manal Ismail <manal at tra.gov.eg>
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Subject: RE: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan

Thank you Manal,
It is okay with me, I was just trying to avoid the repetition of the word "initial" in the paragraph of phase 1.

On May 30, 2017 10:52 AM, "Manal Ismail" <manal at tra.gov.eg<mailto:manal at tra.gov.eg>> wrote:
Thanks Nadira .. I’m fine with either “initial” or “preliminary”, but would suggest that we use the same word in both the introductory paragraph and bullet point 1., for consistency and for readers to understand that we are referencing the same thing ..
Kind Regards

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Subject: Re: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan

Dear Marika,
Thank you for the follow-up

I did some editing to the letter as the following:
-for phase 1.  Removed the capital letters; and suggest to replacement the second “initial” with “preliminary”
-for phase 5. Added "phase" to the following brackets.  (as organized per phase 1.);  put a comment for anther word (not sure of its grammer, English is not my mother tongue).
-for Phase 6. I converted one "and" to &, then put a second “and”

Attached is the document with my suggested edits.

Best wishes,

On Mon, May 29, 2017 at 5:42 PM, Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org<mailto:marika.konings at icann.org>> wrote:
Dear All,

Please find attached for your review the updated letter to the charter organizations concerning the work plan and approach for dealing with the charter questions. This version includes the revisions discussed during last week’s meeting. If you have any further comments and/or edits, please share these by Friday 2 June. Following that, staff will go ahead and submit the letter on behalf of the CCWG leadership team to the chartering organizations.

Best regards,


Marika Konings
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