[council] BC edits to the current proposed GNSO Council response to the call for Public Comment - ICANN Strategy Panels Draft Report

[john at crediblecontext.com]

All,
 
I had sent this directly to the drafting team but at Jonathan's suggestion, I now send them to the full Council.
 
Cheers,
 
Berard
 
--------- Original Message --------- Subject: BC edits to the current proposed GNSO Council response to the call for Public Comment - ICANN Strategy Panels Draft Report
From: john at crediblecontext.com
Date: 4/22/14 7:13 am
To: jrobinson at afilias.info, "Thomas Rickert" <rickert at anwaelte.de>
Cc: "Gabriela Szlak" <gabrielaszlak at gmail.com>

 Jonathan, Thomas:
 
At this point, the BC has confirmed is opposition to offering a comment as a matter of policy, but has little quarrel with the thrust of the comment.
 
With this in mind, I offer the attached which redlines some of the language that can help make the point even as it reinforces the policy role of the Council.
 
Cheers,
 
Berard
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