[Ctn-crosscom] Next call CCWG - CTN: Tuesday, 6 June 2017 at 05:00 UTC

[Susan Payne]

Hi all, apologies that I did not have time to comment on the draft before now.  I am proposing a couple of small amendments in the attached edited version of the redline.  The first is in the Executive Summary on pages 4/5 where I am suggesting moving some text which I think makes the summary flow better.  The second suggested edit is in 5.1.5 to address a comment made by the IPC.  I would be happy to explain further on the WG call tomorrow.

Regards

Susan

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From: ctn-crosscom-bounces at icann.org [mailto:ctn-crosscom-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel
Sent: 02 June 2017 15:05
To: ctn-crosscom at icann.org
Subject: [Ctn-crosscom] Next call CCWG - CTN: Tuesday, 6 June 2017 at 05:00 UTC

Dear all,
Please find included the latest version of the draft final paper (redline and clean).
Following the last call of the WG, staff circualted the draft final paper version 01, and send two reminders.
Until yesterday we have received one comment (from Jaap), which is included. The comment relates to wording around how ISO organizes its work with respect to ISO 3166 (and is included in this version).

Per charter (https://ccnso.icann.org/workinggroups/unct-framework-charter-27mar14-en.pdf) this is the second reading with respect to the proposed changes to the Interim paper.

Kind regards,
Bart

Proposed Agenda 6 June 2017 call:
-         Welcome and roll call
-         Second reading of the draft final paper
-         Next Steps,
-         AOB
-         Closure



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