[CWG-DT-Stewardship] 6 hours left -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August

[Marika Konings]

In relation to item 2, I believe the reference is to the following
documents: 
https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/48347144/IANA%20Function%20
Summary%20Chart.docx?api=v2 and
https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/48347144/IANA%20SOW%20Summa
ry.docx?api=v2 , which were provided by Becky at the start of the DT's
deliberations which are also posted on the DT wiki page
(https://community.icann.org/x/CLjhAg). One is a function summary and the
other one a statement of work summary. If this is indeed correct, we can
include both documents in the annex to the charter.

Best regards,

Marika

From:  Julie Hammer <julie.hammer at bigpond.com>
Date:  Wednesday 13 August 2014 00:34
To:  Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
Cc:  "CWG-DT-Stewardship at icann.org" <CWG-DT-Stewardship at icann.org>
Subject:  Re: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] 6 hours left -- Final Edits due at 23:59
UTC on 12 August

Hi Grace and good morning everyone,

I've had a final look through the document and all the emails that have come
in overnight.  I agree with the change of title proposed by Allan, I am
happy with the revised wording covering consensus, and also happy with all
the other proposed edits with a couple of small suggestions in the section
titled 'Scope'.   

1.  The words that Grace captured in our teleconference regarding scope
exclusions currently read:

For greater certainty, issues related to naming policy e.g. delegation,
redelegation or revocation of ccTLDs, RAA related policy issues etc. are not
within the scope of the CWG.

I find the phrase 'For greater certainty' a little awkward.  As this
sentence follows another sentence about an exclusion, can I suggest we
change this phrase to simply 'Additionally'?  This would then read:

The issue of who performs the Root Zone Maintainer (RZM) role is not in
scope for the CWG and should be dealt with in a subsequent effort as needed.
Additionally, issues related to naming policy e.g. delegation, redelegation
or revocation of ccTLDs, RAA related policy issues etc. are not within the
scope of the CWG.

2.  I also note that the second sentence under the heading 'Scope' states:

The Annex to this Charter contains a summary and description of the IANA
functions drawn from the NTIA¹s statement of work for that IANA contract.

That Annex still needs to be added or the reference to it removed.

Cheers,  Julie

On 13 Aug 2014, at 4:00 am, Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org> wrote:

Hi all, 

Just a quick reminder that we are 6h away from our final edits deadline.

From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
Date: Monday, August 11, 2014 9:59 PM
To: "CWG-DT-Stewardship at icann.org" <CWG-DT-Stewardship at icann.org>
Subject: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Latest Draft Charter -- Final Edits due at
23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!)

Hi all, 

Attached are two versions of the updated draft charter (redline and clean).

I used Stephanie's "minor edits" document as the base for the rest of the
proposed changes. I've outlined the changes I made for your reference:
* Section II: Included Julie's text (first sentence of "Goals & Objectives"
section)
* Section III: Deleted everything except for the first sentence in point 2
of the work plan, upon Chuck's suggestion.
* Section IV: 
> * Included Stephanie's text.
> * Completed text relating to staff assignment in "Staffing & Resources"
> (Grace/Staff). 
> * Included Allan's text on resourcing (can the DT confirm the placement of the
> text in the charter?).
Note: I am missing text from Byron, but I left the text discussed on the
call as a placeholder.
 
Final edits are due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!).


Please let me know if you would like to schedule a final call.
- Grace




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